Metaphor

Nov 10, 2006 14:55

metaphor

I think i've finaly thought up the perfect methaphor for whats happened.

You see its all kinda like that poem i wrote awhile ago.

Ever since i was born I've been walking out on the frozen snow cover lake, theres never anyone aroundme and it's allways freezing cold. One day when I was very youngthe snow blew clear a small section of ice, and i ( Read more... )

freezing, methaphor, friends, ice, rl

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i don't know. tekumu November 10 2006, 21:04:29 UTC
i belive in you... besides you helped me, and i said i would never leave your side as long as you wanted me to be around. i am sticking by my word because you are my friend... death before dishoner.

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Corey anonymous November 11 2006, 05:43:39 UTC
I wonder. Is there even a point to saying, that, there are in fact other's who are trying to keep you warm while you break the ice. Some who watch from the windows of the cabin, wishing they could help. Some standing behind you, in the cold, knowing they can't reach you. Even other's who stand with you, offering you food, so you don't need your stomac pains to settle. "Because only through needing food can you ever be satisfied."

But you choose to ignore them, and in that, you are alone.

So is there a point in what i'm saying, since you'll choose to ignore the me while I stand beside you, offering what little food I can't partake of myself.

I wonder? Will you ever turn your head?

Open your eyes?

One can only Wait. One can only try.

^_^

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Re: Corey b_a_dxxx November 11 2006, 19:37:07 UTC
Thanks dos as sweet as that is, it just doesn't seem like it.

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Re: Corey anonymous November 12 2006, 00:07:41 UTC
then try turning your head and opening your eyes.

^_^

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Re: Corey b_a_dxxx November 12 2006, 12:43:13 UTC
: sigh : Dos We've been over this.

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