Comments | azurefic: modes of perception

synecdoche in azurefic

modes of perception

Nov 01, 2006 19:31

Title: modes of perception
Author: azuredamsel
Character/Paring: House/Cameron, Wilson/Cameron
Word Count: 1327
Rating: R
Prompt: 28. I wrote my feelings down in a rush/I didn't even check the spelling,/And closed the postcard of a painting/You are just another thing that I have yet to fathom,/Oooh you are just another thing I've yet to fathom. Maximo Park, ( Read more... )

backsexy, wilson/cameron, house/cameron

Comments 32

kj_draft November 2 2006, 06:16:10 UTC

Seriously lovely writing! Let me echo everyone so far and say that the style was heartbreaking and so melancholy and well done. I love the bolded "him"s too and the sense of moving on but wishing otherwise.

Thank you so much for writing and sharing. Loved it.

synecdoche November 5 2006, 00:53:56 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm really glad that you enjoyed it -- thank you so much for leaving the lovely compliments. ♥

xheartrockx November 2 2006, 16:11:11 UTC

Oh.. the pain.. the pain.. my poor little heart.
Okay.. you know that I'm a H/C shipper but I LOVED this. Even though they don't get the ending.
And the bolding, striking and all just add this beautiful texture to it.

A great, great read. But you know that I'm your fan, so.... ;)

synecdoche November 5 2006, 00:54:55 UTC

Thanks! I'm really glad that you liked it, despite the sad ending. ♥

(By the way: I'm working on the next chapter of Shooting Range, which will hopefully be up within the week. I'm really sorry about the wait!)

xheartrockx November 5 2006, 21:33:56 UTC

I love sad endings. I come over from the Spuffyverse and I always had a thing for angst and all that. So... I'm all into the emotional distress ;)

And don't you ever be sorry for letting us wait. I've been working on this Spuffy fic for about 3 years now and it's not finished because I'm horrible at continiously writing something. We want it to be good, so we'll wait. 'cause it's going to be good :D

weirdlittlemeg November 2 2006, 17:27:24 UTC

That last part put a lump in my throat.
This was absolutely beautiful. <3.

synecdoche November 5 2006, 00:55:15 UTC

Thank you! ♥ I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

blue_crystal_9 November 2 2006, 23:09:58 UTC

Ohhhhh...amazingly beautiful and sad. *memories* Excellent job. :)

~Janelle

synecdoche November 5 2006, 00:55:44 UTC

Thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)

beeeez November 3 2006, 12:31:57 UTC

This was really awesome. The writing structure was different and brilliant and it just fitted.

Well done!

synecdoche November 5 2006, 00:56:23 UTC

Thanks! There were times when I was writing this and thought it was pretty weird, so I'm really glad to hear that you enjoyed it. ♥