Comments | azurefic: modes of perception

synecdoche in azurefic

modes of perception

Nov 01, 2006 19:31

Title: modes of perception
Author: azuredamsel
Character/Paring: House/Cameron, Wilson/Cameron
Word Count: 1327
Rating: R
Prompt: 28. I wrote my feelings down in a rush/I didn't even check the spelling,/And closed the postcard of a painting/You are just another thing that I have yet to fathom,/Oooh you are just another thing I've yet to fathom. Maximo Park, ( Read more... )

backsexy, wilson/cameron, house/cameron

Comments 32

teenwitch77 November 2 2006, 01:10:52 UTC

Oh my GOD.

I love this so much.

I love the use of bolded pronouns instead of House's name. And the jump between the two different men. Ack, so deliciously dark and sexy and sad.

I like the postcards too. It seems like such a House way of expressing his feelings. Keeping things vague, but there's a touch of romantisicm to it as well.

Oh so memorying. The writing is gorgeous. What a terrific style.

synecdoche November 5 2006, 00:49:26 UTC

Thank you! ♥ I'm so thrilled that you enjoyed it.

To be really honest, the bolding was an accident -- I was at first going to capitalize all of the pronouns, but that seemed pretty angry when I was typing it out. So bolding it was. (It's always a pain differentiating between House and Wilson in House/Cam/Wilson, which is where the idea came from in the first place. Oh, logistics...)

Thanks so much for reading. :) I'm really happy that you liked it.

cozy_cupcake November 2 2006, 01:24:46 UTC

That was fantastic! The way the words flowed on the page, the scratches, and the bold pronouns. *Sigh*

The postcards were an excellent touch and the last one broke my heart.

I'm putting this in my memories.

:)

synecdoche November 5 2006, 00:50:12 UTC

Thanks! The postcards were my prompt, but it was kind of hard to figure out how to work them in without making them contrived, you know? So I'm really glad you enjoyed them, and the whole fic. ♥

daynawashere November 2 2006, 02:24:23 UTC

Ohhhh. So gorgeous. I loved the style, especially the striked-out text. I don't really know what else to say besides this whole thing was beautiful. It's going straight to my memories.

synecdoche November 5 2006, 00:50:58 UTC

Thanks! I'm really happy that you enjoyed it. :)

(By the way -- I'm working on the next chapter of Shooting Range. Hopefully it will be posted within the week... Sorry about making you wait forever!)

ex_chaosity November 2 2006, 02:34:15 UTC

This was absolutely beautiful. I am in awe. Like, speechless. I don't know what to say, except BRILLIANT. I think I'm going to start actually adding things to my memories, just so I can add this one =)

synecdoche November 5 2006, 00:52:34 UTC

Thank you! I'm really honored that you liked it so much. ♥

livlovlaugh November 2 2006, 04:24:27 UTC

This was gorgeous. So utterly gorgeous. I love the style. And I dont ship Cam/Wilson AT ALL! :P

synecdoche November 5 2006, 00:53:18 UTC

I'm glad you liked it, despite not shipping Cam/Wilson. ;) (By the way, your icon is pretty much gorgeous!)

livlovlaugh November 5 2006, 01:00:06 UTC

Haha, I'm warming up to the idea, but I will always be a HouseCam shipper at heart :) Oh, the icon was made by _dennis_csi_ (best icon-maker!)