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Shooting Range (12/?)

Sep 29, 2006 18:43

Title: Shooting Range (12/?)
Author: azuredamsel
Pairing: House/Cameron.
Rating: R.
Warnings: AU post-Hunting (2.07).
Summary: But, for whatever reason, he can't help but smile back at her. What if Cameron had called House instead of Chase in Hunting? An alternate universe. A work in progress. Earlier parts (and an FAQ!) can be found here.
Disclaimer: They're ( Read more... )

shooting range, house/cameron

Comments 11

daynawashere September 30 2006, 00:07:50 UTC

...Am I first?

daynawashere September 30 2006, 00:12:55 UTC

Wheeee, first! Oh YEAH.

This was a great chapter. Soooo many good lines. My favourite was:
(She didn't return the call he made a week ago. But maybe Wilson deleted the message.) Because it's just so...sad. And desperate. And I love when House is sad or desperate. lol.

And I'm loving the AU-ness. I've been following the episode timeline in my head as I've been reading this, so I've been getting excited that the benefit is coming up...and now it IS, yay!

(Sorry for my lack of coherency. Too much caffeine, me thinks.)

synecdoche October 1 2006, 21:29:29 UTC

Thanks! (Secret: I skipped a patient. But since this is an alternate universe, I figure that's okay once in a while...)
I'm glad you're enjoying it! :)

synecdoche October 1 2006, 21:28:28 UTC

Yes, indeed you are. ♥

angi_is_altered September 30 2006, 00:18:39 UTC

Oh, I like it, More please!

synecdoche October 1 2006, 21:29:56 UTC

Thanks. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

xheartrockx September 30 2006, 11:24:34 UTC

When's your next History class so we get more of this? *lol*
I love Cameron's reaction to the open letter. And oh yeah... he is deperate there ;)

Can't wait for the next part and the benefit :D

synecdoche October 1 2006, 21:31:05 UTC

I have history five days a week, so hopefully more will be soon. I'm so excited for the next two chapters.

I'm really glad you're enjoying it! (And by the way, thank you so much for nominating Shooting Range. ♥)

xheartrockx October 1 2006, 21:50:19 UTC

That's good to hear then :D I keep forgetting that you guys have the same schedule every day. Stupid me *lol* See.. now you made me all curious for the next two chapters.

And you're quite welcome. I couldn't let it go unnoticed, now could I? :D

blue_crystal_9 October 3 2006, 00:34:06 UTC

A large chunk of this was written when nothing was going on in my AP US History class. (Sorry Jefferson and Hamilton, you're taught pretty badly.)

I know what you mean. I have Canadian Geography classes at least four times a week, and every hour I spend in that class is an hour lost off of my life. *sighs* It's so boring, and plus it's stuff we've already learned a zillion times before. I wanted to take Canada History, but there wasn't enough teachers. :( I don't usually write any fics in Canadian Geography, because I sit in the front and my teacher would definitely notice that I wasn't paying attention. But I do spend most of the class thinking about House, and thinking up fic ideas and storing them in my brain for later use. ;)

He should have stopped at Starbucks on his way to the hospital. He could use a shot of espresso. Or five.*laughs* Oh, Starbucks rocks. Sadly we only have one Starbucks in the whole entire province that I live in. It's in a Chapters store, which is awesome, because I can read and drink coffee at the same ( ... )

wildcatlizzie November 27 2006, 10:18:26 UTC

I can't believe how far behind I've gotten in this! This was good; I love the was you build the tension, but don't resolve it entirely too quickly. Keep up the good work! :)