Exploited Weaknesses

Apr 23, 2006 16:03

Puri keeps losing her nerve when she writes kiss scenes, even pecks. It's like... dammit, I'm a wuss. Or I've been used to writing friendshippy fics for a long time. Who knows! Another lame title that states the obvious, too. And I have a feeling I just screwed up utterly again at the ending. XDDD;;; EN-EEE-WAY... this one's for panku_tasuku. I'm due to write ( Read more... )

character: sonic the hedgehog, fandom: sonic the hedgehog, gifts, rating: g, pairing: sonic/blaze, character: blaze the cat

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orin April 23 2006, 21:45:10 UTC
Aw god. I suppose I'm not supposed to be commenting on this but I LOVE it. It's gorgeous and adorable and OMG, Blaze is perfect and Sonic kissed her~ And you wrote him so naturally and he felt so natural, y'know? All real and... in character!

Arg! Should be writing RP reply but had to say... this is adorable. And lovely and cats not liking water made be laugh because god knows, Sonic can't swim to save his life either~! Had the image of her and Sonic staring, aghast, at water in general y’know?

X3 <3

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nejlbana April 23 2006, 23:11:33 UTC
Had the image of her and Sonic staring, aghast, at water in general y’know?

... *explodes* xD

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insanepurin April 23 2006, 23:23:19 UTC
Mwee~! No, I don't mind at all you're commenting. I like knowing what other people think. :) I'm really happy you enjoyed it--I made sure they were speaking naturally in my head, eh? ;D

Aw man, now that I think of it... it's true! XDDD! Lucky for Sonic he has the Water Shield from S3&K... but I doubt either he or Blaze are heading for the ocean anytime soon--you'll 'prolly need chains. Poor hydrophobics. XDDD;;;

Again, I'm so glad you loved it. X33333~!

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nejlbana April 23 2006, 23:03:18 UTC
. . . . . .

*explodes into mush* <3 <3 <3 <3

Oh my goooooooood. That was beautiful! Both Sonic and Blaze were so in character, and the cute-level was sky rocketing! Thank you so much for doing this, I'll work on yours..

x_X When my writing turns nice and stuff. >.> But I promise you'll love it.

*goes back to drooling over story*

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insanepurin April 23 2006, 23:25:43 UTC
They're both so bloody adorable, that's what they are. X3333 *cuddles blue hedgehog & purple kitty* I love exploding in warm and squashy, so that was exactly what I was aiming for and succeeded. ;DDD

I'm glad you looooooooooooooved iiiiiiiiiiiiit~! *huggles~!* ;333333

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carriepika April 24 2006, 01:07:00 UTC
Aww~! =D

I'm like Orin, the thought of Sonic and Blaze both staring, horrified, at water, is hilarious. XD <3

And this was so cute! With Sonic giving her the kiss and Blaze's first instinct obviously being to turn him into crispy little hedgie charcoal. XD o.o <.<; <3<3<3

AGH. I need a Sonic/Blaze icon! ;0; *flails* <3<3

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