Comments | azure_horizon: A Handful of Dust, Sherlock/John, 'Sherlock'

azure_horizon

A Handful of Dust, Sherlock/John, 'Sherlock'

Jun 05, 2011 23:30

Title: A Handful of Dust
Summary: All Sherlock wants is to go home; home to John. Post-TGG
Characters: Sherlock, John, Irene, Mycroft
Pairing: Sherlock/John
Rating: PG-13
Notes: I have writer's block on my other fic, so I decided to fight it with an old meme. Put your music player to random and write a ficlet for each song that comes on, writing only ( Read more... )

sherlock, fic.sherlock holmes

Comments 16

miss_variety June 5 2011, 23:00:21 UTC

Oh that's totally beautiful, I love how you managed to fit all ten pieces into one actual piece of fic, instead of ten different stories. But my favorite is the ending, Sherlock running to get to John was really wonderful. :)

azure_horizon June 5 2011, 23:05:51 UTC

The music helped, lol. I hit play and "Nothing Ever Happens" came on and I was like... Yup. It's a sign, lol.

Thank you :)

sabrinaphynn June 5 2011, 23:00:52 UTC

I have chills that was so good. wow.
ok will stop gushing now.
Jenn

azure_horizon June 5 2011, 23:05:11 UTC

Lol! Gush away, my ego enjoys it ;)

Seriously though, thank you very much :)

fanbot June 5 2011, 23:21:39 UTC

Wonderful!

azure_horizon June 5 2011, 23:38:41 UTC

thanks :)

ellie_hell June 5 2011, 23:58:15 UTC

Thank you, thank you, thank you!

I am amazed! You managed to turn an 'unblocking trick' into a beautiful fic and the different parts fit so well with the songs (well, they worked with the song I know).

It's sad that Sherlock misses John, but he misses him so beautifully that I enjoyed the separation. The moment with Mycroft was very sweet, I love how they subtly expressed that they kind of missed each other (Mycroft, you big softy with your gifts).

It think that's my favourite part: He's struggling today. He's been struggling for many todays lately (more like everyday, but he hides it well, most of the time). There has to be something magic about you; you take words, regular words, and you put them in ways that make me shiver. And I enjoy that Moriarty asks Sherlock to remove his shoes, this height complex in such a bad man is... I don't know what it is, but I like it. It's like Voldemort being scared of bees (I had written beads. BEADS ( ... )

azure_horizon June 6 2011, 00:02:13 UTC

Thank you :) I'm glad you like it! Lol.

Voldemort and bees? What? LOL LOL.

Google the Kalahari desert night sky... beautiful ♥

Also, I've been at Octo in The Arches. It was fun, in a way. I only ever went once, lol.

ellie_hell June 6 2011, 00:22:41 UTC

Oh wow it is beautiful! I would love to see it in fic; Sherlock and John in Africa, chillin' with the meerkats, havin' sex under the stars doing very important stuff.

azure_horizon June 7 2011, 20:33:25 UTC

hahaha I know! Perhaps Sherlock will take him there ;)

bicyclefish June 6 2011, 00:46:28 UTC

This is so interesting. I love your stories. I have never heard of doing this before. I have to try it, but somehow I don't think my 80's music and show tunes will lead to something as wonderful as you have here.

azure_horizon June 6 2011, 11:51:57 UTC

LOL It was very difficult when the two dance/trance songs came on but... Well.

Thank you very much :)