Title: A Handful of Dust
Summary: All Sherlock wants is to go home; home to John. Post-TGG
Characters: Sherlock, John, Irene, Mycroft
Pairing: Sherlock/John
Rating: PG-13
Notes: I have writer's block on my other fic, so I decided to fight it with an old meme. Put your music player to random and write a ficlet for each song that comes on, writing only
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I am amazed! You managed to turn an 'unblocking trick' into a beautiful fic and the different parts fit so well with the songs (well, they worked with the song I know).
It's sad that Sherlock misses John, but he misses him so beautifully that I enjoyed the separation. The moment with Mycroft was very sweet, I love how they subtly expressed that they kind of missed each other (Mycroft, you big softy with your gifts).
It think that's my favourite part: He's struggling today. He's been struggling for many todays lately (more like everyday, but he hides it well, most of the time). There has to be something magic about you; you take words, regular words, and you put them in ways that make me shiver. And I enjoy that Moriarty asks Sherlock to remove his shoes, this height complex in such a bad man is... I don't know what it is, but I like it. It's like Voldemort being scared of bees (I had written beads. BEADS?!)
The last three parts are lovely, I adore how much of Sherlock's thoughts are about John and I want to hug him so badly because... awww he wants to go home and home is John and I wished for John to be there waiting for him and of course he was, dear him. Sherlock's reaction at the end was both heartbreaking and sweet, I love that they're together again :-)
...Yeah, so I googled The Arches and Octopussy. I'm still not sure if putting drunk people in an inflatable structure is the best or worst idea ever.
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Voldemort and bees? What? LOL LOL.
Google the Kalahari desert night sky... beautiful ♥
Also, I've been at Octo in The Arches. It was fun, in a way. I only ever went once, lol.
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