Narnia Poem: "Heir" // remake //

[ayumi_nb]

So, as the subject says, it's a remake of my last poem, that wasn't really a poem, it was a nursery rhyme-a child's song (lyamainu  pointed it out to me, thank you). Now, no matter how much of a failure I am in poetry, I gave it a second try.

I spent the whole day thinking of a way to make that piece of poem/child's song into a real poem and I remembered

Comments

[lyamainu]

Ooh, I like!

Much, much better, I'm very impressed - I can tell you worked hard on it.

[ayumi_nb]

Thanks, I'm glad you like it, 'cause yeah, I worked pretty hard on it and it seems it was worth it.

[ayumi_nb]

=) Thanks, I'm glad you like it.

I particularly like this line, 'I am just the Heir
of the Kings and Queens of Old.'

That line originated all the poem, it was the first line that came to my mind.