So, as the subject says, it's a remake of my last poem, that wasn't really a poem, it was a nursery rhyme-a child's song (
lyamainu pointed it out to me, thank you). Now, no matter how much of a failure I am in poetry, I gave it a second try.
I spent the whole day thinking of a way to make that piece of poem/child's song into a real poem and I remembered
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