Comments | ayumi_nb: Naruto Fic: "China Doll"

ayumi_nb

Naruto Fic: "China Doll"

Mar 11, 2010 00:16

Ehhh, yeah...

This is random, you've been warned.

Title: "China Doll"
Beta: In need of one =)
Rating: PG
Words: 1,665
Characters: Sasuke, (oc) Satoshi, (oc) Kenichi, Sakura, (oc) Mikoto
Pairings: Sasuke/Sakura (really, did you expect any other?)
Theme/Prompt: #70, Porcelain. Table's HERE
Warnings: Fluffy, as in VERY fluffy. I'd say spoilers, but ( Read more... )

character: uchiha kenichi (oc), character: haruno sakura, character: uchiha mikoto (oc), ff: naruto - post-kg, ff: oneshots, ff: aus, character: uchiha sasuke, character: uchiha satoshi (oc), themed comms: fanfic100, ff: naruto - manga!verse, rating: pg, fandom: naruto, ship: sasuke/sakura, ff: naruto - au

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ayumi_nb March 11 2010, 16:51:39 UTC

totally

mikochan_noda March 13 2010, 10:05:14 UTC

I totally loved Sakura getting teary eyed when Sasuke comforts his cute little daughter. I'm a sucker for sentimental scenes like that *pinches the cute Uchiha Family~*

ayumi_nb March 13 2010, 15:36:04 UTC

Hehe, thanks

empathapathique March 15 2010, 06:08:13 UTC

okay, this was the best newuchiha!family fic that I have ever read. seriously. you did an amazing job with the characterizations and everything. I love Kenichi, Satoshi, and Mikoto. You need to write more about them. seriously.

Gosh, I think I'm in love with you because of this

ayumi_nb March 15 2010, 13:30:54 UTC

thanks!

it's good to know you love the kids, even though i didn't originally thought of using them further than last fic, they grew on me XD

so you'll definitely see more of them