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ayumi_nb

Harry Potter Drabble: "Beginnings"

Nov 27, 2009 22:57

And I bring another drabble, ha, they're so easy to write, and fun, but a little frustrating as well... Now, this is totally random.

Anyway, enjoy!

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Title: "Beginnings"
Beta: No one
Rating: PG
Words: 300 (100 each)
Characters: Harry, (Hermione), (menions of Ginny and Cho)
Pairings: Harry/Hermione, (mentions of Harry/Ginny and Harry/Cho)
Theme ( Read more... )

character: ginny m. weasley, character: hermione j. granger, ff: harry potter - au, ship: harry/hermione, ff: aus, ship: harry/ginny, fandom: harry potter, character: cho chang, character: harry j. potter, ff: harry potter - dh, ff: drabbles, themed comms: harry100, ship: harry/cho, rating: pg, ff: harry potter - ewe

Comments 8

madderbrad November 28 2009, 20:29:40 UTC

A very nice idea, and executed well! I like the idea of the scarf being the event/accident that kicks Hermione over from the 'sister' part of Harry's mind into 'wow she smells good' territory. :-)

ayumi_nb November 29 2009, 19:50:16 UTC

Thanks!

I wanted to keep it simple, the beginning of their relationship ought to be that way, uncomplicated, just another everyday thing.

wolfraven80 November 29 2009, 01:17:52 UTC

That was adorable! And the scarf is just such a wonderful premise -- such a small thing. it just works really well. Nicely done!

ayumi_nb November 29 2009, 19:52:25 UTC

I think their relationship is all about small details. Little, but very significant, things.

addisonj November 29 2009, 01:20:46 UTC

Really sweet. This is lovely. (I've heard that scents can do that, awaken memories or feelings). I like how it's something as ordinary as a scarf to do it; It's ordinary, but it's special because it's hers.

ayumi_nb November 29 2009, 19:53:51 UTC

Thanks!

musicffyou November 29 2009, 06:09:30 UTC

lol very cute one shot.

ayumi_nb November 29 2009, 19:54:04 UTC

thanks!