Straying into my heart - Chapter Eight (Final)

[ayang902]

Title: Straying into my heart
Author: ayang902
Pairing: Yamada/Chinen
Genre: romance, drama, fluff, au
Rating: PG
Summary: It's no secret to his friends, Yuto and Keito, that Chinen has a crush on Daiki. But when his dreams of being with Daiki are interrupted by one of Daiki's own best friends, Ryosuke Yamada, Chinen can't help but feel annoyed, if not

Comments

[airichan24]

ERMAHGAWD. ERMAHGAWD. ERMAHGAWD!!!! This story was so good!!!!! From the start to the end!! GOOD JOB!!! :D :D :D :D :D

[ayang902]

Thank you!!! ^^ hahaha I'm glad you liked it, and read to the end! xDD
thanks for commenting! :)

[chibicorvus]

ASLKAHDKJSADUISAHKJD
YOU KILL ME! YOU KILL ME! WITH YOUR AWESOMENESS!!
THIS FIC IS ADORABLE!!! ♥

[ayang902]

*REVIVES* heehee THANK YOU FOR YOUR AWESOMENESS!! :3
thanks so much for reading and commenting! I'm glad you liked it :D

[riina8chi]

Just read all the chapters
I really liked the story :33
Great job d(>w<)b

[ayang902]

Yay thank you for reading all the chapters! (hope it wasn't too long ne.. xD)
I'm glad you liked it! :)
thank you!! and thanks for reading and commenting ^_^

[riina8chi]

Iiya iiya iiya
It wasn't long
It's was short (in a good way, I guess?)
Well, let's say it was suitable :)
I wish there was more though xD
You're welcome!! :))

[ayang902]

Hahaha okays :D
Hehe more yamachii is to come! ^_^
yays! <3

[iwiik_kriwiik]

Wow! ;)
I have been waiting for you to finish this fic since I already loved the summary but I don't usually read chapered if they are not finished - I hate waiting for new chapters :D and you finished it aaaaand I just read the whole thing in one go and WOW I just LOVED every single word ♥ :)
I particulary loved Ryosuke in here he was just so adorable, I mean his behavior in the begining so mysterious, but still so adorable ♥♥
haha and even though it has thing that I honestly don't like and rarely read (the whole ich-form, you know the "I did this etc"), but I'm glad I read this because it was amazing ♥♥

To sum my thoughts up - it was an amazing fic and extremely enjoyable reading experience ♥♥ So Thank you for sharing this :)

oh and now excuse me I'm going to search your LJ hoping to find another Yamachii written by you ;)

[ayang902]

hahaha cool! I do the same thing too (I'm not too good at waiting... xD) hehe all of the chapters?! I hope that didn't take too long.... ^_^;; But thank you so much for reading and commenting!! I'm really happy that you liked it! :D
Ahh haha Ryosuke's character was kinda difficult for em to write, but I'm gla he came across as likeable! x3
Actually I don't really like first person either, so I understand what u mean xD and I don't think I have that many yamachii fics (or that many fics in general.. LOL *checks my own index*) but somehow I feel like out of the fics I have written, yamachii is one of the more common pairings.. and I write chinen in first person more than I originally realized... o.o Hahahaha xD I guess I feel my personality is closest to Chii's xD
Thank you again for reading!!

[iwiik_kriwiik]

Ikr? :D It's annoying :D And no, it didn't take too long (you write short chapters *pouts*)... and even if it did it's fine since I have holidays right now and am caught at home with sprained ankle *whines* :D

tbh I don't often comment when I read something, but I just HAD TO comment here. And I was trying to comment on your other fics as well but idk why LJ decided to be mean and was just eating my comments :D If this one gets through I'll try to comment on the others too :) (I'm not weird ok?:D)

He was adorable, I liked this whole teenager-in-love-totally-not-knowing-what-to-do-with-it :D he was cute ;)

LOL and yet you write it :D
yeah, I've noticed *pouts*. I know it's not my place to say this, but you should write more *wink wink* :D ;)
Haha so you don't even realize it? :DD

<3 :)

[ayang902]

hahaha gomen about the short chapters! xD I have trouble making up good & elaborate descriptions =__= aw i hope your ankle feels better soon! being injured over holidays is no fun >< I had a broken leg over spring break once... it was bad :(
YAY THANKS FOR COMMENTING! :D hahaha *feels special* jk xD (that's okay, I like being weird myself! ^^)
hehe i see you're a yamada ryosuke fan :) LOL i think that's cuz thats how all teenagers feel, ne? confused and clueless when it comes to love xD (at least, that applies to me xD)
yeahhhh i dunno why, I guess I feel like chinen is a good outlet for my own problems. LOL i've written first person as chinen at least like 3 times already.... xD *falls over

♥♥♥

[ciel_chiishoryo]

Hey!
I really like ur stories ne ~^^
especially this xD
I know my comment is very late demo I just found ur lj
And I'm glad that I found it xD
U really have nice stories xD
I super loooooooooove this
I hope there is a sequel hihi xD

Ciel desu
Yoroshiku
New reader desu!
I'm a tobikko too and my ichibans are chii and yama xD
Yes both of them I can't choose hahah!
ありがとうございました。