Straying into my heart - Chapter Eight (Final)

[ayang902]

Title: Straying into my heart
Author: ayang902
Pairing: Yamada/Chinen
Genre: romance, drama, fluff, au
Rating: PG
Summary: It's no secret to his friends, Yuto and Keito, that Chinen has a crush on Daiki. But when his dreams of being with Daiki are interrupted by one of Daiki's own best friends, Ryosuke Yamada, Chinen can't help but feel annoyed, if not

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[iwiik_kriwiik]

Wow! ;)
I have been waiting for you to finish this fic since I already loved the summary but I don't usually read chapered if they are not finished - I hate waiting for new chapters :D and you finished it aaaaand I just read the whole thing in one go and WOW I just LOVED every single word ♥ :)
I particulary loved Ryosuke in here he was just so adorable, I mean his behavior in the begining so mysterious, but still so adorable ♥♥
haha and even though it has thing that I honestly don't like and rarely read (the whole ich-form, you know the "I did this etc"), but I'm glad I read this because it was amazing ♥♥

To sum my thoughts up - it was an amazing fic and extremely enjoyable reading experience ♥♥ So Thank you for sharing this :)

oh and now excuse me I'm going to search your LJ hoping to find another Yamachii written by you ;)

[ayang902]

hahaha cool! I do the same thing too (I'm not too good at waiting... xD) hehe all of the chapters?! I hope that didn't take too long.... ^_^;; But thank you so much for reading and commenting!! I'm really happy that you liked it! :D
Ahh haha Ryosuke's character was kinda difficult for em to write, but I'm gla he came across as likeable! x3
Actually I don't really like first person either, so I understand what u mean xD and I don't think I have that many yamachii fics (or that many fics in general.. LOL *checks my own index*) but somehow I feel like out of the fics I have written, yamachii is one of the more common pairings.. and I write chinen in first person more than I originally realized... o.o Hahahaha xD I guess I feel my personality is closest to Chii's xD
Thank you again for reading!!

[iwiik_kriwiik]

Ikr? :D It's annoying :D And no, it didn't take too long (you write short chapters *pouts*)... and even if it did it's fine since I have holidays right now and am caught at home with sprained ankle *whines* :D

tbh I don't often comment when I read something, but I just HAD TO comment here. And I was trying to comment on your other fics as well but idk why LJ decided to be mean and was just eating my comments :D If this one gets through I'll try to comment on the others too :) (I'm not weird ok?:D)

He was adorable, I liked this whole teenager-in-love-totally-not-knowing-what-to-do-with-it :D he was cute ;)

LOL and yet you write it :D
yeah, I've noticed *pouts*. I know it's not my place to say this, but you should write more *wink wink* :D ;)
Haha so you don't even realize it? :DD

<3 :)

[ayang902]

hahaha gomen about the short chapters! xD I have trouble making up good & elaborate descriptions =__= aw i hope your ankle feels better soon! being injured over holidays is no fun >< I had a broken leg over spring break once... it was bad :(
YAY THANKS FOR COMMENTING! :D hahaha *feels special* jk xD (that's okay, I like being weird myself! ^^)
hehe i see you're a yamada ryosuke fan :) LOL i think that's cuz thats how all teenagers feel, ne? confused and clueless when it comes to love xD (at least, that applies to me xD)
yeahhhh i dunno why, I guess I feel like chinen is a good outlet for my own problems. LOL i've written first person as chinen at least like 3 times already.... xD *falls over

[iwiik_kriwiik]

Haha it's ok :DD Everyone has different writing style ;)
Aw, thank you :) The worst part of it is still the fact that it's the last week of holidays :(
Ouch, I'm sorry to hear that :(( That must have been terrible :( What happened? o.O

You should feel special!! >:-{ jk of course :) :D

OMG I LOVE HIM ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ eerrrr.. yeah :D I'm his fan ;) You like Chii the most I take it? ;)

Woah, now I actually thought about how I feel/felt when in love :D Idk, I'm rather cold hearted so for me it was always I like this person or it's complicated so I don't care :D idk :D

:D haha so you feel your personalities are similar? ;)

[ayang902]

haha i'm rather straightforward xD
:( Well I hope you can enjoy your last week of holidays, regardless! heh I kind of trip and fall easily, so stairs are not really my friends.. ^^;;

hahaha yay! ^^

YAY YAMADA :D ahahahaha Chii and Yuto both! ^_^ but I don't really ship them together.. (LOL) which is the ironic part xD

hahaha maybe its just me then... *falls over* xDD I do dislike complicated love though... like I'm watching Chii's Sprout drama... and the story's getting complicated and I'm just like "stop!! pleaseeee...." ><

I guess so!? hahaa I dunno, I can't really say for sure, because I don't really know what Chinen is like.. but how i imagine him in my mind, his personality is like mine xD

[iwiik_kriwiik]

:D
Haha alright, to be honest it's not really that bad, I'm used to just walking around injured oh the joys of horseriding :D I just wanted to justify my reading all that I could get my hands on :D ;)
:D:D omg haha are you telling me that you fell down the stairs?:D and managed to break your leg in the process? :D LOL :D You are talented :DD

He's the best!!! <3 <3 <3
I don't know, to be honest I don't understand this need to ship everyone together :D I like Yuto and I like Chii and I can see that they are friends but I just can't imagine shipping them together. Just no :D

Don't worry, my best friend is like that too :) and usually she ends up crying at my shoulder, so yeah, I'm rather cautious when it comes to love ;)
Haha I still hadn't seen a single episode (waiting for it to be finished :)). Is it good? ;)

:D:D and how exactly do you imagine him? :D

and omg your icon <3 sooooooooooooo cute~~~~ I bet Yamachan liked that one :)

[ayang902]

ooh you do horseriding? I've never rode a horse before.. xDD
LOL yes, i am quite talented... ^^;;

yeahh, shipping everyone together is just a little too much.. but i do plan on writing a yuto and chinen fic eventually, and see how it goes xD

aw haha xD being cautious is better than being reckless though :) Sprout is okayy.. it has convinced me that Chii is absolutely amazing, but his love rival (Jesse Lewis)'s acting kind of annoys me... by being emotionless >.> haha but Chii's school friends (Tanaka Juri and Yasui Kentaro) are my favorite characters, because they're so hilarious and silly! and not part of the confusing love story.. xD

Chinen seems rather like pretending to be happy, but really hiding troubles within.. but he's also expected to be a genius at everything, so i feel like he's feel scared or pressured within because of that too. he really likes others to like him.. and he's really determined to accomplish things :)

hehe he's so cute no? ^^ (much cuter than myself xD)

[iwiik_kriwiik]

Yup.. Well not that often anymore since school is rather demanding lately (finished high school in May and I will be starting uni next week :)), but I've been riding for a few years ;) You should try it, it's one of the best things I have done with my life so far <3 Horses are amazing animals <3 ;)

Sorry, but I'm laughing at your clumsiness right now :DDD

It should go to them realizing they are better off as friends and that Yamachii and Okajima are the way to go :DDD But no pressure :DDD (JK of course, write whatever you want to write ;))

Yup :)
Hahah that Jesse kid is so cute :)) Haha people on FB like those two a lot too :D it makes me really curious ;)

And that's about the way I see him too :D ;)) so you're like that too? ;)

He is~~~~ (since I dunno how you look I won't reply to that :D But you are rather cute in a not visible way.. does it makes sense? like from the things you write - and the way you write it - you sound like person who it would be just so fun to spoil :D omg, I'm turning into Yamachan LOOL :DD :))

[ayang902]

ooh that's cool! I never thought of going horseback riding xD

THANKS! xP hahahaha XD

haha all rightttt.... xD no pressure? :D

lol! most of my friends are all like YAY JESSE! cept for me and only one of my friends... xD I'm sorta caught by his emotionless-ness ._.

sorta, I guess?! xD hahaha I don't want to sound too overbearing tho, its probably not how people normally see me xD

hahaa I'm actually more used to being the one taking care of/ spoiling my friends! LOL xD but at least I don't sound pretentious or anything xD

[iwiik_kriwiik]

You should try it, honestly! <3 It's rather hard at the begining but once you get used to it it's totally amazing. <3 Really, I have so many great memories with horses <3

right, no pressure :D:D what, did it sound differently? :D

I don't know I saw him only in Yan Yan JUMP and there he was adorable :)

why would you sound overbearing? o.O :)

You're like me!! *high five* :D:D but really? Sorry, don't take this the wrong way but I really got this Chii-vibe from you. Like can take care of yourself with no problems but still likes others to spoil you :) sorry, I don't even know why I had this feeling =.=" Gomen ne ;)

and can I ask you something? how old are you? ;)))

oh and by the way I just realized I never really introduced myself to you: Hi, I'm Iva, yoroshiku~~~~ ;))))

[ayang902]

hehe that sounds like fun :3 ahh maybe eventually?? I wouldn't be against it, but I dunno personally anyone who horseback rides xD

of course not... ^^;; hahahahaa :D

like i don't want to sound insistent or pretentious or anything, by saying I'm like that xD

hahaa no need for apologies! :D well around my friends I'm like the mom, unless the we're talking about johnny's, because then I go into fangirly mode, and people look at me like I'm crazy :D (LOL my friends are not reallyyy as big/overall johnny's fans as I am, but they'll still talk about them with me xD)

I'm in my second year of high school now... xD which i think is younger than you, because you said you were taking entrance exams for uni? ^^;;

Hi Iva! :D (lol!) I'm Annie, yoroshiku ne ^^

[iwiik_kriwiik]

It is~ Well then you'll get to know them! :D ;) no, really, you should try it :)

:D:D that's good :D ;)

o.O well you are just the way you are, there's nothing insistent/pretenious about it ;)

:D:D Hahaha I know how that feels :D I'm like that too :D (except my friends don't talk to me about Johnny's *cries*)

yup, I'm starting uni tomorrow :D

:D Hi Annie-chan <3 :)

[ayang902]

hahaa if I ever get the chance to, I won't turn it down :)

hehe okays :D

it's hard to find Johnny's fans in real life, isn't it!? xD I only have a few (but they're not veryyy big fans xD)

good luck! ^^

hello! :D if you don't mind my asking, which country are you from? (just curious ^^)

[iwiik_kriwiik]

That's good ;)

It is! If you are not from some asian country then it's hard! I know about 3 people from my country (and even those I met on internet and never in rl) but my friends are usually like "you like japanese guys? are you learning japanese? say something in japanese! and then wow they are not good-looking and they are not talented" *facepalm* so I just kind of gave up and sometimes tell about them to my best friend and that's it..

aw, thank you ;)

:) I'm from Slovakia (currently in Czech rep because of school ;)) You? ;)

[ayang902]

aww that sounds tough... :( *facepalm*

i'm in the US, so I guess there are more asians here xD I have friends that listen to asian music, but not necessarily Johnny's ^^;;