YOU WON'T SEE ME LOVE THIS FIC LESS NO MATTER HOW MUCH YOU KICKyuncynMarch 22 2011, 17:18:19 UTC
It is the point of every writer, I think, to connect with the reader. If not THE point, then at least _one_ of the points of writing is to connect, at some level, with the person who reads.
I can promise you that I connected to this piece, right here. There're SO many things I relate to: the crying, the forgetting, the hoping and wishing I can retain memories of the past and being so afraid of forgetting what has gone by. (Btw, DOLPHINS EEEE. But I digress.)
The first blue butterfly quivers on your smallest fingertip, still-new wings waving gently.
See? This way, we can still come back anytime you think of us.That bit? Made me incredibly happy, because I thought they'd just leave. But they circle back instead, and I realised, that's the right thing to do. That's what memories _are_. They don't leave. They circle back and you remember them as and when you can or need. The idea of them becoming beautiful, graceful butterflies, of changing into something softer after you can finally _let go_, is expressed so beautifully here. I know
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oh my god axtar here i am at the school library weeping like a boss
yunyun's comment says everything i felt while reading this story, truly there is so much that i can connect too and it hurts in a bittersweet way ;A; you are amazing and kidchan is amazing and when two amazing things come together apparently it makes people cry ♥
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I can promise you that I connected to this piece, right here. There're SO many things I relate to: the crying, the forgetting, the hoping and wishing I can retain memories of the past and being so afraid of forgetting what has gone by. (Btw, DOLPHINS EEEE. But I digress.)
The first blue butterfly quivers on your smallest fingertip, still-new wings waving gently.
See? This way, we can still come back anytime you think of us.That bit? Made me incredibly happy, because I thought they'd just leave. But they circle back instead, and I realised, that's the right thing to do. That's what memories _are_. They don't leave. They circle back and you remember them as and when you can or need. The idea of them becoming beautiful, graceful butterflies, of changing into something softer after you can finally _let go_, is expressed so beautifully here. I know ( ... )
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But thank you. ♥
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yunyun's comment says everything i felt while reading this story, truly there is so much that i can connect too and it hurts in a bittersweet way ;A; you are amazing and kidchan is amazing and when two amazing things come together apparently it makes people cry ♥
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And wtf don't waste your tears on this - I wanted it to flow better but I think I failed, whut. ;A; Improvement, I must have it!
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