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Handle with care [Chapter 2]

Aug 13, 2013 12:48

Title: Handle with care
Author: Axraxshi
Pairing: Matsumiya, Sakumiya (supposed to be, but it’s hardly mentioned)
Summary: When Jun conquered the Neen Kingdom, the castle and its lands weren’t the only prize that he received
Disclaimer: Don’t own the boys, just the retarded-ly named kingdoms

[Prologue] [Chapter 1]

Chapter 2:The ride back to the ( Read more... )

#handle with care

Comments 9

gambitsfox August 13 2013, 08:38:42 UTC

Jun needs a little make over in the feelings department huh? Sounds like he'll get it. : )

axraxshi August 14 2013, 08:18:45 UTC

Oh, Jun will get one :)

riidaaisbest August 13 2013, 11:39:56 UTC

I wonder what exactly Jun will do to Nino (& also Sho & Kazuya). But! As someone who likes your making Nino miserable, I hope it's angst-filled. I like this update! I hope you'll update soon :D. Thank you for sharing~

axraxshi August 14 2013, 08:19:41 UTC

This is supposed to be an angsty fic, so there will be more to come. Thanks for reading!

yumi_usagi August 13 2013, 16:37:41 UTC

Jun is so mean to Nino! Poor Nino!
Thanks for sharing! ^^

axraxshi August 14 2013, 08:20:13 UTC

Thanks for reading! Jun is mean to Nino isn't he, but it's going to change...eventually :P

boblemon August 14 2013, 07:41:13 UTC

Actually I'm really interested in the storyline you made here. I'm looking forward to how Jun's feelings may change towards Nino in the future, and honestly, I don't care if Nino is physically weak. For me, that makes him an interesting character, moreso than just someone who was beaten into submission, he has more layers to the way he's acting.

I'm also curious if Jun is just lying about Sho and Kazuya, it seems like he just left them behind to fend for themselves. Looking forward to your updates!

axraxshi August 14 2013, 08:22:07 UTC

Your comment just made my day! And it has also inspired me to change the original plot completely (in a good way). Thanks for reading!
PS: Actually Jun does have Sho and Kazuya hostage, I just thought it was good enough for Jun to say that he does rather than write a whole paragraph about them being held prisoners :P

boblemon August 14 2013, 08:27:39 UTC

Ah, are you going to change the plot completely? XD I hope that really is a good thing! I really like Matsumiya when Jun and Nino are at odds with each other, and you did it in an interesting way, so... :) Good luck writing!

So he does have them hostage, lol. >_< That's just me being paranoid.