HOW'S MY DRIVING?
aka HMD.
This go round is coming a day early due to Botcon, so! Enjoy :3
ALSO PLEASE BE SURE TO READ RULE FOUR GUYZ it's a bit different <3
ONE: Post one comment listing all of your current characters. This can be done with either your character's journal or your personal one - So long as the comment is there and
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Jess | Player Relations, Applications, Advertisement, HMD, AC
Stupei | Graphics, Applications, wank prevention, character updates, General
HELPSTAFF
Dirge | General, Applications
Red | General
Reve | Player Relations/General
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I don't really have any constructive criticism at this time.
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TFA: Blackarachnia | technoorganic
Roxanne | neveradamsel
Rapunzel | 70ftandcounting
Denizen:
Neytiri | ney_tiri
IDW!Arcee | eventusfactum
All journals listed have their own crit post as well.
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I still feel you are doing a good job with Rapunzel. The series of abductions provided lots of opportunity for her to be innocently outraged at the evils out there in the world. And you still got to show her trepidation with the outside world, when she met Stormer at the transit hub.
Roxanne is good, too, I think. If there is anything negative, it's that I wish the incident with the green gunk had lasted a bit longer. I suppose that it was realistic it be cleaned-up quickly.
Her reactions to the abductions were executed well. It seemed like she is capable of being hurt, harmed, and feeling bad and angry, without crossing the line to "damsel in distress". Roxanne was able to use what happened as motivation to investigate the abductions with an aim to stop them.
Neytiri got a chance to talk about some plants, I recall.
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Blitzwing highly_unstable
Soundwave Sound_loyal
Perceptor debt_to_pay
Skywarp scaredwarp
I'm still on hiatus, so activity is not really relevant at the moment. But anything else, I am totally game for.
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It's good to have plots that can get characters involved and enable us to show how our characters would react to new problems. Optimus being able to see the value in teaming-up, for example. I think, last HMD you felt he got burnt out, so it seemed to me as a reader, you found a way to get him involved again.
I also like Skywarp being terrified of offlining (with his giant text). And Blitzwing not grasping that Starscream was capable of offlining permanently (which strangely, he wasn't actually capable of), after all those times they just through him into the river canyon. (Detroit outskirts have really interesting topography.)
When player availability allows, I look forward to seeing what is going on with Soundwave.
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Dexter Morgan | darklydreamndex
...Also on hiatus. Activity needs to go up, I know.
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Does Magnus have a fish in Axiom Nexus?
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And no, no he does not. =*( I miss Bermuda, to be honest, but I don't think she would fit in very well here.
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Semi-relatedly, there's probably some neighborhood, in the offworlder zones, frequented by organics with brightly-colored hair, where they have koi ponds, for those characters who would be interested.
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IDW Jazz | ops_meister
Denizen:
William Lennox | major_lennox
Blargh, I know Lennox needs to do things. Now that I'm less busy hopefully I can throw him in things again.
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A suggestion or wish I have is that Malcolm finds something worthy of taking over. I don't know if you already planned such, but I remember reading a log in which his internal monologue hinted he didn't currently have anything to conquer.
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Yeah I would love to have him try to take something over. My only problem comes with his distinct lack of soldiers lol DW Starscream is the only other mech he has in his army right now |D He's working on a base but he was a little sidetracked by being a helicopter lol I'm tentatively working out some sort of plot with Angie because there needs to be a Megatron/Prime throwdown but there's nothing else right now.
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