I know I already told you, but I love the opening scene with Pete. I mean, we all joke about it, but I don't know that I've seen it actually written in fic like that. I appreciated the frankness of it.
“What do you do with them?” Brendon asked one afternoon, when he and Ryan were alone in the lounge, Jon and Spencer gone for coffee and probably shoes.
I know I already said it, but seriously, so much love. Probably shoes! Of course!
“It’s just all really stupid, Ryan. Don’t punch Brendon anymore. I’ll have Jon talk to him, get him to agree not to call you a slut anymore. We’ll work it out. Stop saying he’s out of the band.”
“He is out of the band,” Ryan said stubbornly.
“I’m not above strangling you,” Spencer said. “I have really strong arms.”
“I can run faster,” Ryan said. “You’d never catch me.”
“You’d better start running, then,” Spencer said, and lunged for Ryan. Ryan scrambled up off the concrete and sprinted off to the bus.Oh, man, I really loved these interactions. I mean, they're having such a serious conversation,
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I just like the idea that Ryan's like, "HE'S FIRED" and Spencer's like, "shut up, no he's not" or whatever. Like Ryan gets all worked up about something and Spencer pets him and coddles him and chills him out.
I have NO IDEA where the candy wrapper thing came from. I think I just needed it to be more Brendon and that was the only thing I could think of. :(
Do you really think it's hot? I mean, because. I'm too chicken to post it to DYW. Skurred.
Oh my! Very much love for this. It was wonderfully written and amazingly characterized and hot, oh so hot.
I believe this Brendon and Ryan. I could so very easily see this being them. All of poor Brendon's conflictedness and the Mormon-boy innocence clashing with the rockstar life and the desire to have his best bud's lips wrapped around his cock. And Ryan, oh Ryan. I want to hug him a lot.
It was smut, yes, wonderful smut. But within the span of this you managed to convey much more than just hot sex. For that, I love you.
But back on topic of the hot smut... guh... it was all pretty much perfect. The rimming and and all of Brendon's uncertainty and the first time sex. Plus the ending was so lol-worthy. Of course Spencer would figure it out, and Jon wouldn't be the least bit surprised. I am going to bed with a big smile on my face. Thank you for that. ^^ <3
Honestly? This was awesome. Brendon and Ryan and their dorkass inability to talk and gugh rimmingyeahot. :D The characterisations and the relationships were awesome, well done. Thanks for an amazing read!
i wish i had more time to write a better comment right now because this was insanely good, but i really need to go to sleep now.
i will just say that ryan was incredibly hot in this.
i know ryan being a slut is kind of a cliche, but i actually believed him as a slut in this story, which is awesome, most people just imply it and i don't think it comes off as realistic. “I fuck them, Urie, what the hell do you think I do with them?”--fucking fantastic.
also, imagining brendon getting random blow jobs from girls in bathrooms is also pretty hot.
basically, i love this and i'm very glad i get to have sweet dreams of this tonight.
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“What do you do with them?” Brendon asked one afternoon, when he and Ryan were alone in the lounge, Jon and Spencer gone for coffee and probably shoes.
I know I already said it, but seriously, so much love. Probably shoes! Of course!
“It’s just all really stupid, Ryan. Don’t punch Brendon anymore. I’ll have Jon talk to him, get him to agree not to call you a slut anymore. We’ll work it out. Stop saying he’s out of the band.”
“He is out of the band,” Ryan said stubbornly.
“I’m not above strangling you,” Spencer said. “I have really strong arms.”
“I can run faster,” Ryan said. “You’d never catch me.”
“You’d better start running, then,” Spencer said, and lunged for Ryan. Ryan scrambled up off the concrete and sprinted off to the bus.Oh, man, I really loved these interactions. I mean, they're having such a serious conversation, ( ... )
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I have NO IDEA where the candy wrapper thing came from. I think I just needed it to be more Brendon and that was the only thing I could think of. :(
Do you really think it's hot? I mean, because. I'm too chicken to post it to DYW. Skurred.
I'm glad that you liked it, honey. ♥
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*butts out*
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It was wonderfully written and amazingly characterized and hot, oh so hot.
I believe this Brendon and Ryan. I could so very easily see this being them.
All of poor Brendon's conflictedness and the Mormon-boy innocence clashing with the rockstar life and the desire to have his best bud's lips wrapped around his cock. And Ryan, oh Ryan. I want to hug him a lot.
It was smut, yes, wonderful smut. But within the span of this you managed to convey much more than just hot sex. For that, I love you.
But back on topic of the hot smut... guh... it was all pretty much perfect. The rimming and and all of Brendon's uncertainty and the first time sex. Plus the ending was so lol-worthy. Of course Spencer would figure it out, and Jon wouldn't be the least bit surprised. I am going to bed with a big smile on my face. Thank you for that. ^^ <3
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i will just say that ryan was incredibly hot in this.
i know ryan being a slut is kind of a cliche, but i actually believed him as a slut in this story, which is awesome, most people just imply it and i don't think it comes off as realistic.
“I fuck them, Urie, what the hell do you think I do with them?”--fucking fantastic.
also, imagining brendon getting random blow jobs from girls in bathrooms is also pretty hot.
basically, i love this and i'm very glad i get to have sweet dreams of this tonight.
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