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[awakeunafraid]

Asked What The Damage Was
NC-17; Brendon/Ryan (Pete/Ryan)
for jzbell and tragedy.

Comments

[eloquentrants]

Oh WOW, that was amazing. Please, please, PLEASE. *gets down on my knees to beg* Please don't let it stop? Make it into a longer fic? Perhaps involving Brendon kicking Pete's ass? :D

:`( I'll cry if you don't keep this going.

[thewayout]

i don't think that it will be a longer fic, and i'm sorry if that makes you cry. but thank you for reading and enjoying it!

[thewayout]

I like Pete, honestly I do, but I definitely think that he's kind of a douche and I've seen the chat log of him with Ryan and I couldn't stop thinking about how one of the first things he ever says to Ryan is asking if Panic are hot. So I just... had to go with it. Thank you for sticking with it, and I'm definitely glad that you enjoyed it in the end.

Haha, I do like Ryan as the slutty bottom, but I definitely also like the idea of him topping. So I decided to go with it. :)

[kairi999]

wait...he asked them if they were hot? Bwhahahaha!!! Priceless!

[ezboard_1]

it reminded me of a pete/brendon story d_disarmed did except flipped, and her characters were a different. i really liked this one too, it's kind of the other perspective, if ryan would have been the one to go down on pete instead of brendon.

brendon was so childish in this and I kind of wanted to punch him in the face, sexually conflicted or not, calling ryan out like that is such a bitch move. and that's good, that you made him real enough for me to want to hurt him, lol. I was a little lost with tone, like just because is changes so quickly in the end (probably my own fault tbh because i'm imagining the story to be a lot darker than you meant for me to think it is) but other than that ryan and brendon felt like solid, complete characters. yeah, i really liked it.

p.s: the sex was hot too, especially the last bit of it once brendon stopped crying like a bitch, lol.

[thewayout]

thank you! i really appreciate what you said about the characters, also. so thank you for that, too.

[thewayout]

oh, i believe he does. mostly because it sticks out of his pants all over the place and i don't question whether it exists or not.

Thank you so much. I'm so glad to hear that the characters were realistic. So thank you.

[fidelity_blue]

I looooved this
It was brilliant
Yerritwas!!
The last bit actually made me LOL
The secks was hawwt
And the storyline was awesome
^__^
♥

[thewayout]

thank you!