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avocado_love

Fic: Lose Yourself

Jul 12, 2010 19:03

Title: Lose Yourself
Rating: PG
Words: 2,100
Summary: A What If story: Zuko is caught and brainwashed by the Dai Li in Ba Sing Se.
Notes: Written in reply to prompts by the marvelous attackfish and sharkflip .
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( The sun is shining bright... )

fic: lose yourself, fandom: avatar: the last airbender

Comments 54

numb3r_5ev3n July 13 2010, 02:24:14 UTC

WOW. 0.0 This is awesome.

avocado_love July 13 2010, 03:36:45 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked it. :D

sharkflip July 13 2010, 02:33:02 UTC

Fin? Fin? WTF, fin?

avocado_love July 13 2010, 02:37:46 UTC

Hahahahaha. Whoops. Fixed.

I'll probably have the next part in a couple of days. ;D

sharkflip July 13 2010, 02:42:12 UTC

I WILL SO THREATEN YOU FOR MORE.

Or bribe you. After this latest split, 32 is finally smoothing the rest of the way out.

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aerodactylus July 13 2010, 02:55:59 UTC

Whoa. I am quite impressed.

avocado_love July 13 2010, 03:41:17 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked it. The next part should be up... soonish. :D

kaoriz July 13 2010, 03:02:21 UTC

Ummmm AMAZING. I fell in love with the prompts and I wanted more and you brought it perfectly!!! I love that it's coming full-circle, that Zuko isn't just left as a plaything to Ozai and Azula.

avocado_love July 13 2010, 03:42:47 UTC

Thank you for your comment! Yeah, I just couldn't stand leaving him like that. The next part up should be up... soonish. :D

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avocado_love July 13 2010, 03:44:03 UTC

Haha. That much Zuko whumping comes from long practice. ;D Poor kid. Anyway, thanks for your comment. I'll be updating with the next part... soonish. I only hope it's not as dark.