Comments | avocado_love: Fic: Lose Yourself

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Fic: Lose Yourself

Jul 12, 2010 19:03

Title: Lose Yourself
Rating: PG
Words: 2,100
Summary: A What If story: Zuko is caught and brainwashed by the Dai Li in Ba Sing Se.
Notes: Written in reply to prompts by the marvelous attackfish and sharkflip .
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( The sun is shining bright... )

fic: lose yourself, fandom: avatar: the last airbender

Comments 54

natural_blue_26 July 13 2010, 04:11:03 UTC

That was so creepy. Please write more!

avocado_love July 13 2010, 19:45:00 UTC

Thank you! Glad you liked it, and I'll definitely be updating with a part 2. :D

arha_chan July 13 2010, 04:19:53 UTC

Hello! i added you a little while ago, but i think i never commented here. I wanted to say that a few weeks ago i watched the 3 seasons of Avatar, and totally fell in love with it <3. Doing what every normal person would do, i went in the search of fanfics! xD and then i discovered your fic "Another Brother". I loved it so so much! and i also did a good use to your Avatar recc list lol, so thank you, for the list, and for writing amazing fanfiction of an amazing series <333.

I liked this fic a lot too. Poor Zuko :(

Oh, and thank you very much for adding me back <3.

(sorry for my bad english ;;;;;)

avocado_love July 13 2010, 19:47:21 UTC

Hey there! Wow, that's great to hear. :D Your English is just fine. I'm real happy you liked Another Brother AND the Rec list, too. (Man, I need to update that one of these days...) Thanks again. :)

hivers July 13 2010, 04:56:51 UTC

This was... tragic, but also amazing. Every character felt spot on. I really hope you continue!

avocado_love July 13 2010, 19:47:50 UTC

Thank you! That's quite the compliment. I'm going to be updating with part 2, soonish. :)

roachpatrol July 13 2010, 04:57:50 UTC

This made me so sad! But in a very sweet, good way. I really like it. Poor conflicted Li. Poor Aang, who gets it immediately.

avocado_love July 13 2010, 19:49:17 UTC

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it, and I'm sorry it made you sad. (I can't help whumping poor Zuko. hehe.) I figured Aang would probably pick it up quickly, seeing as he had experience with Jet, but as for the others... Well, they won't be so easily swayed. *G*

Thanks again!

moonylala July 13 2010, 07:44:22 UTC

Man, that hurt in a good way. Poor Mai, wanting so badly for Zuko to be ZUKO again, and poor Iroh, loosing another son, and poor Zuko, feeling so uncertain about himself. I love that Aang not only realized what was wrong with him abut was willing to help fix it, despite Zuko not being his friend.

avocado_love July 13 2010, 19:52:24 UTC

Thanks for your comment! Yeah, everyone who actually cares about Zuko is suffering, and everyone who really doesn't (Azula and Ozai) are more than happy to take advantage of the situation. Jerks. ;D

In this story, I figure Aang is willing to do the right thing, but as for the rest of the Gaang... haha. We'll see. :) Thanks again!