Op fic: Once More With Feeling - Day 6

[aviss]

I finally realized I won't be able to do anything else until I finish this, so here we go. Almost done, next bit will follow like really soon.

Title: Once more with feeling - Day 6
Author: avissPairing: Zoro/+Sanji

Comments

[aoitsukikage]

Yosh! Sanji's finally figured it out...although I'm a little worried about the whole 'cost' thing...

Once again, I LOVE how you're manipulating his emotions. Going from depressed to enraged and now to almost a state of detatched madness is great and completely believable, even if everything else just thinks he's lost it.

And the kiss was so dark and twisted (in a good way) as Zoro is getting killed and...yeah. Hopefully Sanji'll figure THAT one out when he's in his right mind, too :P

Can't wait to read the next one!!

[aviss]

You knew he would, sooner or later XD

Oh well, as anger mad ness was also just round the corner. IF it was me I'd have lost it a logn time ago...

[sanji_x_zoro]

Oh my god my first reaction was OMG you posted another "day" so soon!
Now I'm like T_T Sanjiiiiiii!! He can't die tomorrow!! But I know I would feel exactly the same, and would easily give up my life for them.. But still, that's so sad! I hope hope hope something happens and Death lets him stay :((((
And haha okay I'm gonna start praying some more but boy that kiss was so ... passionate and desperate and heart-clenching!

[aviss]

Heh, this thing has eaten my brain so if I want to be able to function again I have to finish it like now... that's the reson for the quick update (and the fact that I had some parts written for ages)

I won't tell the end, but... Sanji would very happily do it if it saves the rest of them, you know :)

[full_xstacy]

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
No puedo esperar a leer el último!!!
Actualiza pronto, porfaporfaporfaporfaporfa :DDDD!!!

[aviss]

Ya queda poco, pronto esta XD

[popkin16]

I am so scared about this "cost" thing.

So scared >.

[aviss]

Oh well, there had to be a cost... nothing is free, I'm afraid.

[popkin16]

That's logical. I don't know if you've read the series xxxHolic or not, but that series talks about costs being equivalent to the "wish", so...Sanji "wishes" to save his nakama's lives, so I'm worried he'll have to give up his own to "pay".

*Resumes biting nails*

[aviss]

That would be telling, I'm afraid...

Everyone would be able to see it if they really had the time, Zoro is just that bit closer than the rest so he does.