Op fic: Once More With Feeling - Day 6

[aviss]

I finally realized I won't be able to do anything else until I finish this, so here we go. Almost done, next bit will follow like really soon.

Title: Once more with feeling - Day 6
Author: avissPairing: Zoro/+Sanji

Comments

[kahitomi_channs]

Oh My F** Godness!!!
tambien me quede con una cara d...WHAT?? y de ahi salte de la cama YUPIII!! pusiste otro cap ..y fue repentino y con hints de Zo/San San/Zo...aunque halla sido el beso mas frio (zoro muriendose T_T ) y calido a la vez (X3 me quejo! fue muy cortito...pero weno fue lindo), wooaaa al fin sanji deja fluir sus sentimientos y le da el "beso de la muerte" (?) T___T a zoro buaaaaa, amo como haces cada capitulo, te deja realmente sin aliento >w<
Y..."el precio" para salvar a sus nakamas?? dioss, chopper me tendra que dar tranquilizantes, buaa, no quiero que pase eso, no quiero!! (XDDD ni se de que se trata el sig cap y ya me desespero)haha! aunq yo tambien daria todo x mis nakamas T3T buaaaaa
sigue asi!!

[aviss]

Gracias, el precio es algo que si puede pagar aunque los demas probablemente le odien por ello... ademas lo pone, pero bueno XDDD

[halcyonsummer]

;__; Sanji's not going to pay the 'price' by dying is he?

The story is emotionally intense as ever, your characterization is wonderful. I love the range of emotions that Sanji is feeling from depressed and lethargic to emotionally detached madness.

Keep up the good work <3

[aviss]

I'm not telling XD

Thank you!

[bunnymaccool]

I'm caught between being completely TERRIFIED about the final part, and being completely EXCITED to see what Sanji figured out!!

Man oh man... either way... I can't wait!!! <3 <3 <3!!!

[aviss]

Heh, thanks! He had to figure it out in the end, he's not stupid after all XD

[cupcakesusie]

This entry really disappointed me. Up until now, all of the characters had been completely in character and I had enjoyed it immensely. But once you injected the kiss between Sanji and Zoro, it went from 'This could actually happen in canon, it's that great!' to 'Just another yaoi fanfic.'

I really wish you could have continued this story without adding the obvious out-of-characterness, but that's life, I guess. :-(

[aviss]

Well, it does state a pairing and has since day one so I'm afraid it was always going to be "Just another yaoi fanfic" which is the way I like it.

[nami_ane]

Woaaaa!!! No puedo esperar al ultimo capitulo!! Es increible que consigas que sea tan emocionante repitiendo lo mismo todos los dias (claro que con cambios), pero de verdad lo es!*o*

Sanji realmente a perdido la cabeza por un momento e? Pobre hombre, con todo lo que esta sufriendo... Pero por fin a descubierto como acabar con todo! Aunque temo por el precio a pagar...

[aviss]

Hombre como para no perderla, no crees?? Al pobre le pasa de todo!