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OP fic: Once More with Feeling - Day 5

Apr 04, 2009 13:49

Title: Once more with feeling - Day 5
Author: aviss
Pairing: Zoro/+Sanji
Rating: R
Genre: Drama, Angst, Horror.
Warning: Violence, character deaths (only not)
Disclaimer: So disclaimed.
Summary: Sanji is given a second chance to set things right. And a third. And a fourth…
Word Count: ~3.100 this part

( He couldn't do it anymore, couldn't stand the sight of his nakama dying around him for another day. The old woman was right, he wasn't strong enough. )

zoro/sanji, once more with feeling, fic, one piece

Comments 17

bunnymaccool April 4 2009, 14:47:23 UTC

ASDOIWEJFASDKFJSADFKJSDFL;JSDF!!!!

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3!!!

OH MAN!! Poor Sanji!!! I don't blame him for losing it, this is getting super harsh!! Uwah!!! Only two days left!!! What is he going to doooooooooooooooooooooooo????? D8 D8 D8

So much love for this story!!!! <3 <3 <3

aviss April 5 2009, 19:22:11 UTC

Thank you! I feel bad for putting Sanji through so much, and it's not over yet... but well, yes he had to lose it sooner or later, there was no way he didn't.

sanji_x_zoro April 4 2009, 14:49:31 UTC

Nooooo poor poor Sanji! T_T
I want to crush the Death bitch myself. It's so terrible. So angsty! And you're writing it perfectly! This chapter was my favorite one! I'm now gonna pray for some hope!!

aviss April 5 2009, 19:23:01 UTC

Thank you! Soon there will be light at the end of the tunnel (and hopefully it won't be that of an oncoming train :P )

halcyonsummer April 4 2009, 19:19:21 UTC

OH MY GOSH!! (SUDDENLY CAPS LOCK)

T-T Sanji only has 2 days left I hope he can save them.

Please keep writing!! <3 Wonderful job.

aviss April 5 2009, 19:24:10 UTC

Yes, only two more days to go... and things always get worse before they get better... but hee's cope (I hope :P )

full_xstacy April 4 2009, 19:44:49 UTC

Aghhhhhh!!!!!!!!
Nunca vi cuando publicaste el chap anterior xD!
Ahora me alegra, sin embrago. Tuve dos capítulos para recrearme en ellos xD!
Sigue estando increíble el fic así que actualiza pronto, ¿va?
Ya quiero ver cómo diablos vas a termir esto.

atte

Clau!

aviss April 5 2009, 19:25:28 UTC

Ya me queda muy poquito para terminar (de hecho casi nada porque el final lo tengo escrito hace eternidades). Me alegro que te este gustando, muchas gracias por comentar.

kahitomi_channs April 4 2009, 19:48:31 UTC

TuT....nooooo "day 5" es el peor de todos
pobre sanji!!! va a terminar en el manicomio
o al menos robin-nee chan tendra q ser su psicologa personal.
No, en serio, pobre sanji..aunq no entendi una parte
¿Las cosas que pasaron en este dia cambiaron?, igual los mugiwara murieron, pero estan cambiando las acciones d cada uno ..@_@UU joder y no entiendo XDDU

~~~Chopper should've been eaten a long time ago for all the good he did in a fight~~~

asdasdasdasd!! hahaha...no tengo nada en contra d chopper pero..hahahhaha LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL...tienes razon, dan ganas d comerselo x "tooodo" lo que hace en batalla ¬¬U
**suerte cn el dia 6 ^^**

aviss April 5 2009, 19:27:47 UTC

Si, el pobre va a terminar como las cabras de la heidi a este paso.

Las cosas de este dia cambian ligeramente porque Sanji cambia de actitud (su comportamiento afecta a los demas, de un modo u otro) aunque los eventos importantes son los mismos (la guardia, la tormenta y el ataque). Los demas no tienen un referente de como deben actuar asi que cualquier cambio en el comportamiento de Sanji les afecta a sus reacciones.