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Mini-fill: Falling Re: Loki/Tony - Tony buys the team more time [TW: NON-CON]

[anonymous]

Sorry. Not enough confidence with the characters yet to do the proper fill this prompt deserves (and I hope it gets), but OMG, that third bonus sold me so hard...
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Falling.

As he had been minutes (precious minutes -- invaluable minutes) ago, though the drop to the floor had been far shorter than one to the streets below was.

Still, in the vertigo of free fall, he repeated that brief drop over and over.

Spin. There was Loki standing over him, rage and mania chasing one another across his features. "Cats in a bag," Banner's description had echoed back to Tony.

Spin. There was the sick sensation of the pit of his stomach seeming to drop away -- not from the fall, but from the realization that it was too soon. His teammates (strange new word, that -- strange new feeling) had needed more time.

Spin, spin. And, over and over again, there was the choice (right choice? wrong choice? surely there'd been another choice?) he made in that split second before he hit the floor.

You need to activate the cuffs, sir, his reason told him in

Re: Mini-fill: Falling Re: Loki/Tony - Tony buys the team more time [TW: NON-CON]

[anonymous]

This is an incredible read, absolutely devasting and so believable.

Re: Mini-fill: Falling Re: Loki/Tony - Tony buys the team more time [TW: NON-CON]

[anonymous]

Thanks very much. "Believable" is high praise, indeed.

Re: Mini-fill: Falling Re: Loki/Tony - Tony buys the team more time [TW: NON-CON]

[anonymous]

OP here: that was AMAZING! Great fill, incredibly vivid and packing a huge punch and such a poignant ending. I loved the way you used different people's voices as Tony's mental voice of reason, and the way Coulson's was the one that got through ;_;

Re: Mini-fill: Falling Re: Loki/Tony - Tony buys the team more time [TW: NON-CON]

[anonymous]

I'm glad you liked it and the ending worked for you. I still wish I could've given you more. Hopefully someone else will!

Re: Mini-fill: Falling Re: Loki/Tony - Tony buys the team more time [TW: NON-CON]

[anonymous]

Oh god that was absolutely perfect. The way it's framed, Tony being so Tony and continuing his performance issues taunt to distract Loki, Coulson's voice giving him the presence of mind to save himself at the end, the brief flashes of visceral sound and imagery from the rape....

(now I'm really hoping someone combines this fill with that artfill prompt for Loki raping a struggling Tony from a few pages back for a bonus fill).

Re: Mini-fill: Falling Re: Loki/Tony - Tony buys the team more time [TW: NON-CON]

[anonymous]

Wow, I wouldn't say perfect (I'm not satisfied enough with it to de-anon...), but thank you very much. =)

Re: Mini-fill: Falling Re: Loki/Tony - Tony buys the team more time [TW: NON-CON]

[ninastark]

This is incredible. Mindblowingly so. Loved it so much, amazing writing. I don't even want to touch another prompt for a while, because this has just made me completely raise my standards.

Re: Mini-fill: Falling Re: Loki/Tony - Tony buys the team more time [TW: NON-CON]

[anonymous]

Well, wow. Thank you very much!

But you'd best keep filling prompts! Practice makes perfect, etc. Not to mention that I don't think this fic is that good. I was trying something new with it and all I can see is the bits that don't work for me...