Revenge of Mr. Roboto (1/1)

[avaritia_90]

Title: Revenge of Mr. Roboto
Author: Avaritia_90
Spoilers: Paradigms of Human Memory
Word Count: 2630
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: I do not own Community
Summary: Ficcy Friday request from nicodemusfleur with the prompt of a fic expanding on the Robot clip. I hope I did it any sort of justice and that's it's not too corny at the end.

Comments

[screeching_stop]

"Like a hot dog grilled for the very first time"

Excuse me while I go die laughing.

[screeching_stop]

So I just finished reading and.. uh AWESOME?

You managed to make me go from hysterically laughing to heart throbbing with pain at this line:

This isn't real. This is just a figment of your imagination. Run now, and everyone will start calling you Little Adderall Annie again. Do you want that?

Annie's eyes start to burn with tears. She shakes a bit. No. No, she doesn't want that.

Your story is bipolar! Like the fisherman.

Great job honestly. I loved hero!Pierce, Troy and Abed jumping from a vent, and of course the Jeff and Annie of it all. I know I haven't commented on any of your other stories (it's a mix of being shy and lazy) but I'll have you know that I really love them all!

[avaritia_90]

Thank you, and I fully understand the shy and lazy non-comments. I think I had this account for like...four years and didn't really start using it until this year. THAT'S lazy.

[moeexyz]

This is great!

I love Annie's outrage at them throwing books, and then the books being blank. So Greendale.

And the end was really sweet.

[midtega]

Loved this. At last somebody created a story from the clip of jeff saving annie from the robot. Loved that you abed & troy as heroes with their cape getups. Loved jeff's protectiveness of annie totally in character. Loved there was an unlikely hero(pierce) who had a reason to step up. Loved you made jeff, abed, troy, & pierce become heroes willing to save annie. Why? because everyone loves annie in their own different way of course.

[lsw700]

This is awesome. I really loved Pierce (both Evil!Pierce with his crazy schemes and hero!Pierce were awesome), Abed and Troy trying to make Greendale more like Hogwarts (hee ♥) and of course all the cute Jeff/Annie.

Oh, and this:

"It had, up until the damn robot heard Rebecca Black's Friday song, the overly high pitched frequency caused it's complicated, delicate inner workings to go haywire"

Best reason for a killer robot going haywire ever.

[avaritia_90]

This is actually based on nightmare I once had, where because her song was being played so loudly and frequently, that it actually started the dead to rise and start eating the living.

:/

Basically I'm not at all unconvinced that her voice will usher in some sort of apocalypse.

[westwingwolf]

My life is now complete. I could so see that being the full episode. Loved everything from Pierce's talent to Western Sean Connery to Troy & Abed's secret passages. All of it was pure genius. And yay to Jeff refusing to leave Annie alone to deal with Boob-a-Tron.