Final Fantasy Fanart Recs: Lulu, Fran, Fang/Vanille, Fang/Lightning

[auronlu]

So I was pawing through more of 

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[melchar]

If there is a scene change or area shift, then break it into 2 bits. Otherwise, better you let it hang together. ^_^

[melchar]

I went back to comment on part on of the chapter .... and it was gone!

[auronlu]

Sorry sorry! I took your advice and went to fiddle with it some more. That was very much a fake cliffhanger, and the fact that I wasn't willing to post it in places where I archive fic told me it just wasn't ready.

I hope you didn't lose a long comment!

I'm hoping to have the rest done today; everything's written, there's just some phrasings that need smoothing. :)

[melchar]

No worries - I didn't lose a comment. But I was returning to make a 'Oooooo shiny!' happiness post for it having been there and O so readable.