Claire-Watch (A Claire/Elle fic for the heroes_contest 'Cravings' challenge)

Jul 31, 2008 23:22

Title: Claire-Watch
Rating: PG-13 ish …
Word Count: 775 (approximately … gimme a break, the play opens next week!)

Pairing: Claire/Elle (one-sided … for now)
Summary: “Don’t let her see you … no more confrontations, young lady!”

Disclaimer: I do not own Heroes. If I did, Mohinder would be making out with SYLAR instead of Maya in that promo clip, ( Read more... )

claire, fic, claire/elle, heroes, heroes_challenge, elle

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phoenixjustice August 1 2008, 13:29:18 UTC
No this turned out quite well! =D And I'm not much on femmeslash either, but you write it really good! =D

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aunt_zelda August 5 2008, 22:40:32 UTC
*blushes* Oh, thank you, PJ-kun!

(I find it mildly disturbing that the characters I have the easiest time writing are psychopathic murderers. Re: Sylar, the Master, Elle ... gonna try my hand at the Joker soon ...)

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phoenixjustice August 6 2008, 15:48:08 UTC
You're more than welcome, Zel-chan! =D

lol don't feel bad, I don't find it all too hard to write Sylar or others similar either. =P The Joker? lol why not? (But omg tju_tju_tju_tju wrote a Dark Knight/Iron Man fic which was Bruce/Tony, genres which I never read in and I was like OMG! AND! I found a Nathan/Tony Stark fic and it was good! =O))

In other news...I finished the next prompt for the heroes_contest. "late" Are you working on a fic for it too? It's a post-S2 Peter/Isaac of all things. =P I mean, I have always vaguely shipped it, but I just never expected that be what I wrote. So when you get the chance will you read it? It's posted on my ff.net account, on my LJ page and heroes_contest of course.

I can't thank you enough for also getting me interested in heroes_contest! =D First Doctor Who, now this. What's next? lol *huggle*

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aunt_zelda August 7 2008, 02:29:38 UTC
Hmmmmm, sounds intriuging ... I tend to read all the fics in one day (the day of voting) and then comment and vote and such ... I'll TRY and read yours as soon as I can ... *regrettably must go to bed REALLY soon*

Of course I'm doing the prompt! Not quite sure what I'll be writing ... I'm toying with the idea of a Claude/Noah flashback and Claude thinking bitterly about Peter, pre-V3/post-V1 ... *shrugs*

I can't thank you enough for also getting me interested in heroes_contest! =D First Doctor Who, now this. What's next? lol *huggle*
Nawwwwww, you're welcome PJ-kun! *huggles you back* (Thank YOU for getting me into Death Note! *must buy another as soon as possible*)

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bellonablack August 2 2008, 00:50:32 UTC
I love this pairing. :-)

"Elle spends these midday hours in Claire’s room, burying her face in the pillows on her bed; or in the laundry room, digging through the baskets until she found an item of clothing that belonged to Claire and breathing in the girl’s scent."

...Perfectly. Obsessive. XD No, this kind of desparate craving, you caught it perfectly.

"The following exchange - Claire looking all intense and threatening Elle and her daddy - is totally worth Elle’s stained shirt. Couldn’t keep your hands off me, could you, sweetie? Elle thinks to herself later on, giggling out loud."

I don't know, struck me as a great characterization, the reliving aspect of her personality...it's like she has so little really. :/

Great. <3

-BB

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aunt_zelda August 5 2008, 22:45:18 UTC
(Sorry it took me a while to get back to you, Shakespeare play and all ...)

Claire/Elle just ... I can see it. I heard people were pairing them, and then it just CLICKED for me.

...Perfectly. Obsessive. XD No, this kind of desparate craving, you caught it perfectly.
*blushes* Why, thank you very much!

I don't know, struck me as a great characterization
I write insane killers FAR too easily ... *worries about mental state. But thank you all the same! *flourishy bow*

the reliving aspect of her personality...it's like she has so little really. :/
Who's to say she's imagining things? *grinz* I really, really, REALLY want Claire to come out and start going out with May, captain of the cheerleading squad. I have no idea WHY, but I DO ...

Again, thank you very, very much for your wonderful comment!

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tessykins August 4 2008, 03:56:43 UTC
OMG, yay! Yay so hard.

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aunt_zelda August 4 2008, 15:37:25 UTC
Thank you! (It's for this community: http://community.livejournal.com/heroes_contest/ *dashes off to vote*)

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tessykins August 5 2008, 01:37:59 UTC
*dashes off too*

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eternal_moonie August 19 2008, 09:41:05 UTC
I love it! Even if it was one-sided!
Amazing fic!

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aunt_zelda August 19 2008, 20:46:24 UTC
Thank you very much! (Well, seeing as Elle can't talk to Claire, we don't really know if it IS one-sided ... personally I want Claire to canonly be a lesbian, but that's just me.)

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poemwithnorhyme August 24 2008, 04:53:13 UTC
How have I not read this? *feels bad* Well, I am now! It's so good too! I adore Elle's characterization in this, it's simply perfect. And the image of Bennet and Elle reminiscing about Claude is almost too much, I adore it!

You're awesome and totally deserved that award! I won't be able to reply back to your comment on my fic any time soon, so I just wanted to say now how much it means to me that you commented, since I haven't seen you around lately (I've disappeared from the Fandom too, so...*whistles innocently*) Thank you!

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aunt_zelda August 24 2008, 15:28:47 UTC
It's ok, I haven't been keeping up with what YOU'VE been writing (granted, once the Shakespear play was over I had to book flying lessons and plan Doctor Who marathons and suchlike things, so it's a surprise that I managed to write this.)

I adore Elle's characterization in this, it's simply perfect.
I write psycho killers who stalk their signifigant others FAR to easily ... *sigh* this should disturb me, but I'm beginning to get used to it.

You're awesome and totally deserved that award!
*blushes* Oh, you are too kind, but thank you all the same!

I'm sorry I haven't been around latley (Shakespeare, etc.) but I really haven't been keeping up with Mylar since, um, for a few months or so, actually ... too many fics to read, not enough time, and then I was shanghaied by the Doctor/Master crowd and ... yeah, Doctor Who took over for a good bit of the time I've been 'missing' ... now I'm re-watching S1 of Heroes though, in preparation for V3. (THREE HOUR PREMIERE?! *so excited*)
No no, thank YOU!

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