FIRST INSTALLMENT OF THE RAPID-FIRE CHALLENGE (18 drabbles)
Author: me, aunt_zelda
Prompt #s: 1, 2, 4, 5, 7, 8, 11, 12, 16, 28, 31, 35, 40, 42, 43, 48, 49, 50 (that’s right EIGHTEEN!)
Pairings: Mylar, Plaude, Claude/Noah, Kiro, Claire/obscure-female-character
Ratings: PG - R
Warnings: Please watch every Heroes episode ever, I cover a lot of ground with these.
Summary: Kiro is depressing, Claire is a ( Read more... )
Prompt #s: 1, 2, 4, 5, 7, 8, 11, 12, 16, 28, 31, 35, 40, 42, 43, 48, 49, 50 (that’s right EIGHTEEN!)
Pairings: Mylar, Plaude, Claude/Noah, Kiro, Claire/obscure-female-character
Ratings: PG - R
Warnings: Please watch every Heroes episode ever, I cover a lot of ground with these.
Summary: Kiro is depressing, Claire is a ( Read more... )
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Barefoot: Great way to start off the drabbles. I thought this was really cute, and I love the idea of Claire and Monica because it’s such a cute, fluffy ship. I think you should give yourself more credit in writing femmeslash because you have a knack for it and I hope you keep writing it in the future ;)
Need: Angsty Mylar! This one is great because it includes characterization, emotion, and the hurt/comfort technique which I think you handled very well. I like that, at first, Sylar wanted to emotionally kick Mohinder while he was down, but then he stopped and helped Mohinder grieve for his loss. I also like that you revealed that Sylar hadn’t killed Molly (because that would just be horrible!) and the last few lines really added a depth to Sylar’s psyche that I think is always there, but is something he would never admit to himself: he needs Mohinder, and without him he feels incomplete.
Heal: Ah, some Kiro! I think this one is flawless; I love that you expanded on Hiro’s feelings for Adam and that you ( ... )
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Zombiepocalypse: First off, I looooove that Lyle is swinging a machete around here. I also love how all the characters have banded together to fight off the zombies, but Sylar isn’t willing to risk Molly or Mohinder during the struggle. This is an awesome “what if?” take on the prompt.
Teddy Bears: Yay, Claude/Noah! Okay, at first I read one of the lines as ”Noah called the Haitian boy lover” *facepalm* I thought you’d find that amusing. Anyways, I like how you tied this one in to the “sort of/kind of” canon; that Claude was the family’s close friend and was closer to Claire than Noah was - until Noah shot him :P It also makes sense that Noah wouldn’t get rid of the bears, and I like that you explained why he kept giving them to Claire.
Dance: This one is, without a ( ... )
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Undertones- haha. XD. Cute. Love Moho in a suit, and molly being all PO'd was a scenario I'm still just floored by the ingenious concept of. why did I think of that? oh yeah, cause I'm a mywalker whore ^_^
seriously awesome though.
Death- this was just...awkward. Cause um, I totally asked my dad what an orgasm was when I was little. drudging up severely uncomfortable memories here.....
but really, it's awesome. your embarrrassed moho was so CUTE!! and you totally had characterization down for like, the most bizarre situation ever!! love it!!!!!
Closet-ZOMG. you are win. win. win. win. win ( ... )
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Okay, I'm not really into girl/girl slash (also don't like Claire) so much but the Barefoot drabble was just so cute. Hee! Anything involving tickling just...tickles me. XD
Need...Oh, ouch. That one just stabs me in the heart. The imagery and simplicity of it is so beautiful.
Heal: *gigglespazz* Heeheehee! That was just...so Hiro! XD Ah...It feels kind of wrong to be laughing with what state Adam had been in but I can't help it.
"Time doesn’t stop … and within seconds Hiro realizes that Adam might not feel like that and jerks backward: so embarrassed he wants nothing more than to teleport away." <--Win!
Carpet: From this I'm now starting to question whether Peter fits the description of 'puppy-dog' best...or Claude. XD Sleeping on the floor, jeez man. Guess he really doesn't care much for creature comforts.
Shinbones: Like I mentioned before, I really don't like Claire that much, or Femslash, but one thing I really liked about this drabble is how you addressed the Claire/West relationship. I didn't really 'believe' the ( ... )
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Sensitivity: *gigglesnort* Aww! Claude's becoming a bit of a softie (in comparison to what's shown on the show; I see him punching Peter, not kissing him). That was really cute! ^_^
Faulty Reasoning: Poor Hiro!!! *wants to huggle him* He really has had lots of trouble with love. :(
Frankenstein: Okay, the comic thing intrigues me. XD Mr. Rolex!? *gigglespazz* Really nice choice of names. ^_^
Rolex: Ooooo!!! You wrote more about the comic-land! Hee! *glee* XD I can think up plenty of ideas for Mr. Rolex to use. Ah, in real life I bet it'd take Mr. Rolex less than five minutes to come up with and execute a plan on how to deal with Naveen Indras. XD If only Molly could have drawn just a little more...This was really good!
Obscurity: That's right Claude! You can't ignore Peter Petrelli! You have to come back! *pout* Very nice.
Zombiepocalypse: *pout* You killed Bob It was cute that Sylar held Mohinder back! Hee! *really loves Mylar* And double 'Aww!' for Sylar dragging Molly ( ... )
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