Ok, con-crit first: I understand that to retain the detail of Deanna's face, you used lighter strokes than you did for the outlines of the bodies, but it looks a little... weird? Maybe b/c of the really dark strands of hair on the left side of her face (further in the background) that draws attention to the difference in stroke darkness? Also, I kind of miss Deanna's gorgeous hand from the first draft :(
HAPPY TIME: The texture from all the different media and how they work together is absolutely amazing. The moodiness and the colour scheme also totally work with Robo!Sam (really gives it this ohshit! edge). I actually love how the sketchiness of some of the outlines and graphite parts roughens up the image and givens it emotional movement. And I gotta say, you did fabulously with Sam's back! And that sweep of red along the side of Deanna's back - god, you're instilling a back fetish in me.
I really ♥ the colours here - but I think in the redrafting you have lost the likeness to Dean that you had in Deanna's face from your preparatory sketch - her features look a lot sharper in this finished one...
There are a few issues with Deanna's face, I agree. I think I'm going to do another one with just Deanna, as the colours and the strokes I've used for this don't really lend themselves well to details. Should be up tomorrow.
Oh hun... don't apologise to me. I know how it is with having to get something done... no urgency and if it's not happening for you don't sweat it... :)
I love the mood you've created in the piece. It certainly does have a very dark edge about it - it feels very dangerous. Sam's back is so expansive you can feel the power coming off him, especially with Dean(na) looking so vulnerable.
this is so gorgeous! i love comparing what you originally started off with [beautiful, serene] and the final product [tense, harsh]. fantastic work :) definitely reccing!
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I understand that to retain the detail of Deanna's face, you used lighter strokes than you did for the outlines of the bodies, but it looks a little... weird? Maybe b/c of the really dark strands of hair on the left side of her face (further in the background) that draws attention to the difference in stroke darkness?
Also, I kind of miss Deanna's gorgeous hand from the first draft :(
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The texture from all the different media and how they work together is absolutely amazing. The moodiness and the colour scheme also totally work with Robo!Sam (really gives it this ohshit! edge). I actually love how the sketchiness of some of the outlines and graphite parts roughens up the image and givens it emotional movement. And I gotta say, you did fabulously with Sam's back! And that sweep of red along the side of Deanna's back - god, you're instilling a back fetish in me.
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You know what? I sorta miss her hand too, now that you mention it, maybe I'll do a just Deanna one with the original pose.
Robo!Sam refused to drawn in any other way than creepy. D:
Hee, I sorta have a thing for backs too! Join me in my freakiness!
Thank you, darling, both for your lovely comments, and your con-crit. :)<33
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Thank you for the feedback! <33
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I love the mood you've created in the piece. It certainly does have a very dark edge about it - it feels very dangerous. Sam's back is so expansive you can feel the power coming off him, especially with Dean(na) looking so vulnerable.
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Thank you very much. Feel free to rec away, i really appreciate it! :) <33
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