t-ara/iu; red in my ledger | jiyeon/jieun

May 05, 2015 15:19

Title: red in my ledger
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p: jiyeon/iu, f: iu, f: t-ara, l: 100——1000 w

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anonymous May 6 2015, 13:42:23 UTC
Oh my god oh my god oh my god. This feels so unreal. Not you posting something (well, that's unreal too, but I don't mean it as an insult, I'm just really happy to see something from you!) but just this hazy mess of memories in Jiyeon's mind. :( BB, plz be okay.

My favourite part was

The old lady doesn’t know she’s not her granddaughter, but someone comes around daily to check on her and make sure she’s okay. Make sure she hasn’t died yet.

“I was born in 1915,” the old woman says wistfully, accepting the tea Jiyeon hands her one day. Jiyeon thinks, me too.

and also

'had familes that had familes'

There's just small things and details with so much punch.

Time travel was involved, huh? Much excite. Thanks so much for sharing this with us.

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augmenti May 14 2015, 06:51:31 UTC
Aaaa hello anon and thank you for this lovely comment! This idea was one that sort of came at me out of left field and just kept spiralling (honestly, it spiralled into something a lot bigger than I have the time to write, sobs), so this was my attempt to make something in the verse before I lost the idea completely. I'm glad you could pull depth from it and really, really glad you noticed some of the little details that hat deeper meaning.

(And yes, of course time travel was involved, what kind of marvel fan would I be if time travel wasn't involved? ;3 )

thank you so much!

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