The Fire of the Sun -- Chapter Four

[audreyii_fic]

Title: The Fire of the Sun
Author: audreyii_fic
Fandom: Twilight (Team Jacob)
Rating: T
Characters: Full cast (Jacob/Bella, Sam/Emily)
Genre: Romance/Angst/Wolfpack!Humor
Warnings: Language, violence, and references to adult behavior. See here for more details.

Comments

[bleviee_62vw]

Awww, Angela and Jessica are amazing! And Charlie, with "the good stuff." I'm so glad Bella got one normal night with the girls, she's going to need it, what with the impending "Angst Threat Level Blood Red" stuff. (Speaking of that, you said if we wanted details, we could contact you, but I'm not good at LJ, how would I do that?)

And then EDWARD. Somewhere inside me, there are words mean enough to call him, but they're buried under all the, "Dude, are you SERIOUS?! Is this whole 'marry a lawyer' shit FOR REAL?!? Dsflkdjfdkjkd." That last sentence is the sound that comes out when I'm too angry for real sound to come out. I kind of hope Charlie arrests him. I mean, I know that "total douchebag" isn't a reason to get arrested, but can't you be held for so long without charges? Maybe Charlie should just keep throwing his sparkly ass in the pen. (I don't like Edward, if you can't tell.)

[audreyii_fic]

Glad you like the girls :D I really didn't expect them to take on the role they're taking (you know, playing a major part in every chapter) but Jessica just keeps talking, so, oh well.

LOL at the soundless anger. Edward looks at the world in a special sort of way. I'm sure that if he gives Charlie the slightest opening, Charlie'll have the cuffs out.

If you want to PM, just mouse over the little head next to my username and click "Send Message" :)

[lunasol28]

.....no words. Will be back when I have my emotions in check. Be prepared for a rant and lots of gushing about how much I love how dark/twisted this is.

[audreyii_fic]

*waits patiently*

[willow2883]

*snort* Poor Bella doesn't even know how to have a boy-free night.
I took the Hershey's Kisses and left them carefully lined up along the window ledge.
Nothing says 'sorry' like Hershey's Kisses.
Godiva?? Oh Charlie! I LUV you! LOL
"We'll invite Jacob over to watch movies--" Bahahaha! I love your Jessica. I totally want to be a part of this girl's night.
And Edward. You totally nailed his passive aggressive shit. Like everything that comes out of his mouth is a huge favor to Bella, not controlling at all. RME
Jacob breaking through the door was so awesome. Oh Bella. Why did you have to kiss Edward when you've got Jake?

[audreyii_fic]

Well, Bella *did* manage to have a boy-free night, at least. She just couldn't manage a boy-free morning. Twelve hours of normalcy seems to be her limit.

Hershey's Kisses are great apologies :D And Charlie was trying to do his very best ;)

Edward is the Picasso of passive-aggression. And though it's up for debate... I feel like this is pretty canon behavior for him. Which scares the crap out of me when you consider how many girls think he's the ideal man. Don't get me started.

Why did you have to kiss Edward when you've got Jake?

Roofies :(

[anonymous]

Amazing! I love everything you write. Tiny edit - Dartmouth is in New Hampshire, not VT. But seriously, I love the way you write Bella/Edward interactions. It hurts because I just want to shake her and hit him, but its right. Totally spot on for both of them. Bella fighting it is so refreshing. And Jake and Charlie's interactions, so good!

Side note, I'm excited for this to get dark. I know that's fucked up, but the saga is set up to have darkness. Its freaking vampires and werewolves and sworn enemies. Give me darkness!!! Give me a satis-fucking-fying ending.

[audreyii_fic]

Gah! *headdesk* Thanks for the catch. I fixed. Considering I have family members who went there you'd think I'd get it right...

Anyway, glad you're liking :) Be careful what you wish for with the darkness, though... we're only gearing up.

[ronjacobfan]

Be careful what you wish for with the darkness, though... we're only gearing up.

Kill anyone you want...except Jake and Charlie. Thanks so much.
(I just screwed them over, didn't I?)

[audreyii_fic]

I'm just gonna tell everyone else you threw them under the bus.

[rawrtothefifth]

EDWARDDD. RAGE RAGE RAGE.

I had the greatest image of Jacob and Charlie being an awesome super hero team.

MORE EDWARD RAGE.

anyway Angela and Jessica are wonderful. You really have turned them into characters that aren't just "random girl in background of scene 24" from Bella's perspective. I'm so glad that you're writing this!

[audreyii_fic]

First off, what the hell is your icon? *tilts head sideways*

Jacob and Charlie as a superhero team... I'm winding up with something vaguely Supernatural-esque. But then again everything in my mind winds up Supernatural-esque if I think about it long enough.

Glad you're liking the girlfriends :) They were a force tragically missing in the series. Probably because they would've spoken truth.

[rawrtothefifth]

The icon is Slowbro from Pokemon. Like the name says, he is probably the slowest (physically and mentally) creature in that universe. And that's why I love him :D