The Fire of the Sun -- Chapter Four

[audreyii_fic]

Title: The Fire of the Sun
Author: audreyii_fic
Fandom: Twilight (Team Jacob)
Rating: T
Characters: Full cast (Jacob/Bella, Sam/Emily)
Genre: Romance/Angst/Wolfpack!Humor
Warnings: Language, violence, and references to adult behavior. See here for more details.

Comments

[anonymous]

Amazing! I love everything you write. Tiny edit - Dartmouth is in New Hampshire, not VT. But seriously, I love the way you write Bella/Edward interactions. It hurts because I just want to shake her and hit him, but its right. Totally spot on for both of them. Bella fighting it is so refreshing. And Jake and Charlie's interactions, so good!

Side note, I'm excited for this to get dark. I know that's fucked up, but the saga is set up to have darkness. Its freaking vampires and werewolves and sworn enemies. Give me darkness!!! Give me a satis-fucking-fying ending.

[audreyii_fic]

Gah! *headdesk* Thanks for the catch. I fixed. Considering I have family members who went there you'd think I'd get it right...

Anyway, glad you're liking :) Be careful what you wish for with the darkness, though... we're only gearing up.

[ronjacobfan]

Be careful what you wish for with the darkness, though... we're only gearing up.

Kill anyone you want...except Jake and Charlie. Thanks so much.
(I just screwed them over, didn't I?)

[audreyii_fic]

I'm just gonna tell everyone else you threw them under the bus.

[ronjacobfan]

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