fic - Something to Come Home To (14/15)

Aug 19, 2010 00:28


Title: Something To Come Home To
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Kirk/McCoy (slow building)
Warnings: Bones has a dirty mouth. So does Kirk.
Summary: A connection between two people forms by degrees. Love is measured by how much you can help a person and how much a person heals you in return.
Notes: Post-It Verse AU! Takes place about 20 minutes into the future ( Read more... )

rating: pg-13, fan: fanfiction, fandom: star trek xi

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icesamzero August 19 2010, 08:02:31 UTC
eeeeeeeeeeeeeee ( ... )

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audi_katia August 23 2010, 19:04:20 UTC
Thank you so much for commenting again!

Lateish hours and having sleepies definitely limit sophisticated wordings, but I loved your comment regardless. :D

I'm glad that you found it identifiable/everyman. I wasn't necessarily trying for that, but I always enjoy books/movies that are created in that manner, so that's a high compliment.

And I really want to thank you for how you characterized the different characters. Especially for saying that Jocelyn is real. So many people try to make her out to be this horrible woman. And yes, she is pretty horrible to McCoy, she's not that bad of a person. She is, as you said, real. I wanted to illustrate that with her snarky attitude to McCoy paired with her absolute love for her daughter. So yes. The fact that you liked how "real" she was is very gratifying for me.

Thanks again for commenting!

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tsarina_sofia August 19 2010, 12:37:18 UTC
Whoops, was supposed to comment on this before. I have been very bad at that lately. :|

Anyway, I wanted to do some sort of happy dance when they got together, except my doggy was using my legs as a pillow. So I didn't... But I wanted too.

Also, I was practically biting my nails hoping to God Jim wouldn't just start doing some sort of Full Monty thing during graduation. Doubt Jim's the sort that would but my mind instantly goes to the worst case scenario.

:) Loved this series and will be sad to see it go.

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audi_katia August 23 2010, 19:06:16 UTC
haha! Your Monty Python comment is excellent because I was seriously considering making him do the Ministry of Silly Walks! But at the time that I was writing this chapter, my sister was looking at awkwardfamilyphotos.com and she came across this picture of a baby wearing the outfit that Jim wore to graduation. So, naturally, I had to incorporate it into the story. But yes. Your Monty Python worry was totally legit.

I'm glad you almost did a happy dance and even more glad that you did not disturb your puppy. lol

Thanks as always for commenting!

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perfect tiedye_ragdoll August 19 2010, 13:29:26 UTC

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Re: perfect audi_katia August 23 2010, 19:06:31 UTC
:D Thank you!

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weepingnaiad August 19 2010, 14:56:49 UTC
AWWW. Finally Bones woke up!

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audi_katia August 23 2010, 19:07:13 UTC
Haha, you make it sound like Sleeping Beauty. lol But yes, he finally woke up and realized what the hell is going on. :) Thank you for commenting!

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audi_katia August 23 2010, 19:10:04 UTC
Yeah, that's me. Keeping the sunshine and roses out of stories. lol

I'm glad you have been enjoying this story the whole way through and the fact that you called this beautiful? I'm blushing. :) I love realistic stories and as much as I enjoy the Star Trek K/Mc stories, sometimes they are lacking in realism and stories that have a build-up to the romance. So, I wanted to fix that problem by writing my own. lol

Thank you so much for commenting. As for a sequel, no. I will not be writing a sequel. If anything, I might write a few one-shots and post them separately under the same Post-It Verse. But otherwise, this story has been completed.

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