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lillian13 March 1 2007, 19:46:39 UTC
I like how these last 2 chapters have neatly smacked the SGC and their 'omygodweleftwimmenincharge' attitudes.
And OMG, Rodney, still so clueless. (poor John!) Thank God for Cadman.

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reginabellatrix March 1 2007, 20:46:25 UTC
Yeah, team moments! So happy to see them sorting things out with each other and becoming a team again.

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lexstar29 March 1 2007, 21:06:18 UTC
Another perfectly balanced chapter, the gentle coming together again, not just of Rodney and john, but of the team as a whole was wonderfully stated. They started to get their cohesion back in a very believable way. Teyla starts to open up to them a little, Rodney, John and Ronon's interaction with each other also shifted beautifully ( ... )

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amothea March 1 2007, 22:11:35 UTC
loved this new chapter. I feel for Teyla.

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mecurtin March 1 2007, 22:23:32 UTC
I was so happy to see *one* chapter of Ard I didn't realize at first that you'd posted *two*. It's a beautiful day in the neighborhood!

For the political decisionmaking and how Elizabeth tries to dance between two worlds, I cover your upturned faces with burning kisses. *Burning*, I tell you. And extra smooches for "what is Teyla's official status, anyway?"

You should join team_sga and put up links as you update, you know. *pimps*

One thing confuzzling me: why haven't we heard anything about what Rodney is going to have to do on Hermea? Or was it mentioned and we missed it?

He'll have to speak to Elizabeth about maintenance, including someone sweeping up after the gate teams.

It is literally impossible for me to believe that they haven't worked this out years ago.

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auburnnothenna March 1 2007, 23:07:31 UTC
You should join [info]team_sga and put up links as you update, you know. *pimps*

I already friended the comm, but I'm never comfortable pushing a story forward, especially one like this, that's been chugging along for so long. I mean, I forget to pimp it in my own journal.

He'll have to speak to Elizabeth about maintenance, including someone sweeping up after the gate teams.

It is literally impossible for me to believe that they haven't worked this out years ago.

That's the sort of maintenance thing Elizabeth probably dealt with ages ago. Or Sheppard assigns the cleaning to marines as punishment duty, and Rodney's just never thought about it before.

For the political decisionmaking and how Elizabeth tries to dance between two worlds, I cover your upturned faces with burning kisses. *Burning*, I tell you. And extra smooches for "what is Teyla's official status, anyway?"This absolutely thrills me, because we rewrote and revised to come to this 'there is no quick and easy solution' place in the story and you're one of the sharp ( ... )

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