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Destruction Where You Stand - chapter nine

Jul 31, 2006 04:55

Chapter Nine: The Wounded Air Roared In

“...walking in the dark and the wind over broken earth
halfmade foundations and unfinished
drainage trenches and the spaced out
circles of glaring light
marking streets that were to be
walking with you but so far from you....”
-Denise Levertov, From the Roof

For a moment, all Remus can do is look helplessly at ( Read more... )

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Comments 15

A random person wandered across a story... anonymous July 31 2006, 15:30:12 UTC

And liked it a lot. I've just read everything so far, and will be awaiting more chapters. Thank you for writing them.

mayushi July 31 2006, 16:05:34 UTC

Oh, goodness, I just read three full chapters on one go! *cheers*

Wonderful work, as always. I love how REAL Remus and Sirius' interaction feels to me, even as early in their relationship as the flashbacks in your last update.

And ooh, that glimpse to Sirius and James' beginning was brilliant - absolutely hilarious. I was giggling uncontrollably when James blamed Sirius for hitting like a girl, and far into full-blown laughter when Sirius turned his hair magenta. And the love between Sirius and Remus is so palpable it's heart-wrenching, how they don't notice it in each other.

More soon, yes?

auberus August 1 2006, 07:36:29 UTC

Thanks much!!! And yes, more is coming -- though I feel as though I ought to use the next chapter to bribe you into posting the next chapter of Damaged.

(insert evil laugh here)

No, I won't do that -- but I am tempted!

mayushi August 1 2006, 15:36:14 UTC

WHAT?!
Oh, you won't:) Phew. Love your icon!
*runs off to write*

maybeido July 31 2006, 22:35:20 UTC

gaaaaaaaaaaah!

God I love this fic! It's so incredibly well-written. I love Sirius' emotions and Remus trying to hold everything together and just yelling at Sirius. It's perfect.

<33333333!

auberus August 2 2006, 08:41:44 UTC

Thank you so much! This chapter was TRICKY, and it's good to know that it went over well.

curiousity_09 August 2 2006, 14:36:33 UTC

Oh no! run, Remus, run!
The interaction between Remus and Sirius is brilliant, I love it. Phineas is my hero. Great chapter, I can't wait for more.

I just read the warning 'character death', now I'm worried.

auberus August 2 2006, 19:59:56 UTC

don't be. that was left over from Bellatrix and Rodolphus -- i forgot to remove the warning tag.

thanks for the comments!

anonymous August 6 2006, 23:46:31 UTC

I am currently in love with your Phineas!

:D Great story, can't wait for more...