iron man ficlet... thing

[atrata]

I don't know. I needed a break from work, and a friend said, "What if Tony wants Pepper to try on the suit?" and I meant to write some porn but instead I took half an hour and wrote this. It's about 500 words of unbetaed cracktastic fluffy proto-fic that may or may not go somewhere porntastic at a later date. God only knows anymore. I am not in

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[magdalene1]

I've only seen the movie (not read any) but this seems dead on - especially her voice. Nice!

[atrata]

Hee. Thanks. :)

[wired_lizard]

Nobody seems to be in particularly good control of their Iron Man thing right now. Which is good. Especially from you--this is awesome and sporfletastic.

[atrata]

Heh. Yeah, I've definitely noticed it's not just me who is entirely incapable of shutting the hell up about Tony. But thank you!

[murklins]

Ahahahaha, better music. What music would he pick to seduce Pepper?

[atrata]

God, I don't know. I am guessing it would be just as bad as Black Sabbath, though. Just in a totally different way.

Even though I kind of like the idea of Pepper liking them just as much as he does. It is her secret shame.

[kaiz]

Brilliant! I just saw the movie yesterday and I'm heretofore in love :-)

[atrata]

OMG KAI. I can't even. I think I've seen it like seven times? It somehow gets better EVERY TIME. Just. Gah. Tony.

Anyway, thanks for checking out my protofic. :)

[left_enthusiasm]

I love Iron Man. And I love your Iron Man fic. I believe that this is another fandom worth immersing myself in.

[atrata]

GIVE IN TO THE DARK SIDE. We have banter! And shiny suits!

[crazyliloua]

I have spent all morning reading your fics and the ones of your friends i've loved them all but I love your comment.

We have banter! And shiny suits!

I died. someone should make that an icon.