Comments | atrata: iron man ficlet... thing

atrata

iron man ficlet... thing

Jun 09, 2008 15:57

I don't know. I needed a break from work, and a friend said, "What if Tony wants Pepper to try on the suit?" and I meant to write some porn but instead I took half an hour and wrote this. It's about 500 words of unbetaed cracktastic fluffy proto-fic that may or may not go somewhere porntastic at a later date. God only knows anymore. I am not in ( Read more... )

fic : iron man

Comments 25

venivincere June 10 2008, 01:28:42 UTC

Your Tony voice is entrancing. Keep going? :-)

atrata June 10 2008, 01:35:50 UTC

TRY TO STOP ME.

...er. Yeah, I don't know. Tony will not actually SHUT UP, but also he is all over the place, so I never know what story I will be forced to work on at any given time. But whatever, I am just going to enjoy the ride. Thanks for reading! :D

miraba June 10 2008, 03:14:22 UTC

You're not in control of your writing? We don't mind. XD

atrata June 10 2008, 03:18:21 UTC

Hee. Thanks! (I don't either, actually. *grin*)

lolitaray June 10 2008, 06:54:33 UTC

Um. This is simply delicious!

atrata June 10 2008, 15:58:55 UTC

thanks!

guinny_hamilton June 10 2008, 08:42:46 UTC

Haven't seen the movie yet and am not into superhero stuff but somehow this is sexy and fun and pretty much awesome.

Gah. Pr0n would be good.

...I still feel Ed Quinn was robbed from this role, though ;-)

atrata June 10 2008, 15:59:11 UTC

you will never sell me on that! i may have an RDJ problem. *grin*

guinny_hamilton June 10 2008, 16:05:14 UTC

Dude, I absolutely ADORE RDJ. Gawd. Ngh. Always have, always will. Ever since I first saw him in Only You.

Doesn't negate the fact though, that Tony Stark is supposed to be tall, and RDJ is tiny compared to the scrumptious Ed Q who not only looks the part but can act his shapely ass off as well. And the abs! OMGTHEABS!!

Then again, RDJ. Does it still count as a problem if it's just. so. goooood?

besyd June 10 2008, 13:38:34 UTC

This? I love. Passionately! Everything is dead on ... voices, gestures ... everything. And so much detail!

"Your skirt, then," he says, still entirely focused on whatever he's doing. "Off."

I love this!

No! No, seriously, sorry.

Ha! He really does know when to back off ... before Pepper smites him!

It's really them. And you've made my morning with this.

atrata June 10 2008, 15:59:26 UTC

I'm so glad! Thanks for reading. :D