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Melts in Your Mouth (Supernatural RPS - Jared/Jensen)

Mar 11, 2006 21:01

Title: Melts in Your Mouth
Author: moosesal
Rating: NC-17
Fandom/Pairing(s): Supernatural RPS - Jared Padalecki/Jensen Ackles
Word count: 4700
Warnings: Slash, nothing in particular need of warning
Disclaimer: I don't know these guys. This is purely fiction and fantasy.
A/N or Summary: Many thanks to winterlive for looking at early drafts and giving me feedback. ( Read more... )

Comments 33

allegraconbrio March 12 2006, 02:55:47 UTC

Okay, I have succumbed to the RPS, omg, so hot thing. Sal, honestly, I clicked here just because it was you writing. And yes, I enjoyed. Hot and really great character work, and that seems kind of weird to me, as this is RPS, but this? You worked it, and I felt it and hell yeah, I think the bit about the heat that the characters on SPN were vibing hit me most in my gut. There is heat, and actually the RPS version of the lust is easier and hotter for me than the Wincest. (and that sounds more judgemental than I intended, but yes, I do think it is the actors more than the characters for me about the lust. I may also be rationalizing. heh).

Hot as hell, bebe. As always, you did it well. Great writing, Sal.

moosesal March 13 2006, 13:46:58 UTC

Thanks, sweetie. I also prefer to read the RPS over the Wincest for these guys. I'm more comfortable with it (not that I don't like the Wincest and the wrongness, just... you know how it is). Thanks for reading. Glad you enjoyed.

mahaliem March 12 2006, 03:23:58 UTC

I really really liked this. I think I have a bit of a Jared being more experienced kink and this satisfied it immensely.

moosesal March 13 2006, 13:48:08 UTC

LOL. Yeah, I don't know why but I like to think of Jared as more experienced and Jensen more innocent. Not that I don't like them the other way around. Or both experienced. Or both innocent. :) Basically, I'm easy. But this isn't news.

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moosesal March 13 2006, 13:49:23 UTC

Thank you! I had a lot of fun working with the M&M jokes. Glad you liked.

savoytruffle March 12 2006, 07:28:27 UTC

i have nice things to say, but they refuse to form themselves into words.

good work, though. as usual.

moosesal March 13 2006, 13:50:00 UTC

Whee! Thank you, thank you, thank you! *smooches*

(Oh, and I think I may have solved my problem with your LJ by installing Firefox at work. We shall see.)

syd21 March 12 2006, 11:19:57 UTC

Fantastic!! And very funny as well... I loved the M&M bits! I adore slash that makes me both melt with want & gives me a giggle. Thanks so much for the great read & job well done!! :)

moosesal March 13 2006, 13:50:47 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you it made you laugh and melt. I like humor mixed in with my porn. *g*