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athenaktt

Not Quite Paradise

Nov 21, 2006 11:04

Title: Not Quite Paradise
Author: athenaktt
Pairing: John/Elizabeth friendship
Rating: Everyone
Spoilers: 3x10 "The Return - Part I", Story takes place during "The Return - Part I". Mention of SG-1, 10x05 "Uninvited".
Summary: This is a short fic that is mostly Elizabeth's POV during her six weeks back home.
A/N: Thanks to mizz_magenta for beta-ing. ;)

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sga, sheppard/weir, fanfiction

Comments 25

alianne November 21 2006, 22:51:16 UTC

Very nice insight into Elizabeth and the other characters as well. And Sparky friendship is just The Best. :)

athenaktt November 22 2006, 01:13:52 UTC

Thanks! I wanted to write this because I saw so many "Return 1" fics that made Elizabeth angsty and IMO it was too angsty. And I hope this fic balanced the depression and her mixed emotions out with what was shown on screen.

Also it was fun, writing the SG-1 characters, since this is the first time I actuallly wrote material with SG-1 in it.

alianne November 22 2006, 09:02:12 UTC

Yes, I think it did balance it very nicely. Great work!

Hehe, and the SG-1 characters are also nicely written. I especially loved how you showed the team spirit between Daniel, Cam, Sam and Vala. And John's reaction at observing it.

agentcat47 November 22 2006, 01:06:37 UTC

Ah! This was fabulous!! You have made me want so much more. But alas, no more, since you are done. Thanks so much for posting it! I don't really know what to say, but anyway, putting this in my memories cause it's so awesome. Thanks!!

athenaktt November 22 2006, 01:15:47 UTC

Aww thanks! I'm glad you like it. Too bad I can't make it longer since the rest should be in the second parter of the episodes. At least I hope there will be more. I haven't seen it yet. :p

Besides there are too many other "missing scenes" I need to work on. ;)

Thanks again!

agentcat47 November 22 2006, 01:59:47 UTC

Well good. There are many other missing scenes I want to read. Which ones do you have in mind?

athenaktt November 22 2006, 02:57:56 UTC

The next one I plan to work on is one for "The Real World". It is basically going to be the 6 hours when Elizabeth is out. It would be from John's POV.

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hopalong_pxp November 22 2006, 03:07:26 UTC

Loved it!

"If you need anything, call Sheppard." Typical of Rodney! And the Vala-rhyming-name bit made me LOL! And trust Vala to notice the way John and Elizabeth would look at each other.

athenaktt November 22 2006, 17:28:37 UTC

Hee Thanks! The whole little bit with Vala wasn't planned at all. It just happened. Vala insisted on making an appearance. ;)

And Vala would always notice little things. Beside I remember her paying attention to John and Elizabeth in the conference room scene in "Pegasus Project". ;)

ankareeda November 22 2006, 14:51:15 UTC

Beautiful! ♥

athenaktt November 22 2006, 17:28:55 UTC

Thanks! =D

bluebanrigh November 22 2006, 21:54:55 UTC

Hehehehe, I was giggling through every message that Rodney left Elizabeth, especially the last one. Oh and how he badgered Beckett cause he thought Elizabeth was angry at him or something. Lol.

And I adored the conversation he had with SG-1, esp the greetings and Vala trying to convince him to change his name to Jam. Hehehe, priceless.

Lots of little pieces of gold in this fic. Great little insight into Elizabeth's time on Earth and how she didn't want to move one. Am hoping you get bit by more plot bunnies. :D

athenaktt November 22 2006, 22:00:11 UTC

Everything in this fic was Deleted scenes! LOL

I actually wrote this fic pretty fast. It took about 2 weeks, and the Sheppard/SG-1 scene was completely unplanned. It just happens. I love and hate it when that happens. Stupid characters having a mind of their own. =P

And you know I have more plot bunnies than I can handle. Now I need to go back and work on "The Real World" bunny. =P