Silk & Lace - chapter 4/?

Aug 16, 2011 09:39

“Helena?” Myka whispered.

Helena giggled and rushed to her. She cupped Myka’s face and kissed her.

“What are you doing here?” Myka mumbled between kisses.

“Artie realized that you do need me after all.”

“Why?”

“I happen to have a very good knowledge about this particular artifact,” Helena said proudly. “As a matter of fact I chased after it ( Read more... )

warehouse 13, summer challenge, myka bering/helena g wells, fanfiction

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pyroskittle August 16 2011, 16:11:51 UTC
I agree with Myka. And all the sudden tomorrow can't arrive soon enough.

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vincent_millay August 16 2011, 17:14:42 UTC
You. Are. Cruel. Tomorrow can't come fast enough.

I also love your Pete, you really have his voice down.

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adrianstclaire August 16 2011, 17:25:13 UTC
I love Edna St Vincent Millay, :) favorite poet ever

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vincent_millay August 16 2011, 22:17:58 UTC
She's my favorite, as well. This fandom seems to have quite a few Millay fans.

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athena_mou August 16 2011, 23:29:19 UTC
Thank you :) I try hard to make the all sound "in character"
I hope chapter 5 will be worth the wait ::fingers crossed::

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adrianstclaire August 16 2011, 17:24:11 UTC
Jesus if Helena told me she thought I might spend If probably melt/die. This is lovely, I can't WAIT for tomorrow :)

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So evil. anonymous August 16 2011, 18:56:34 UTC
You enjoying just leaving us hanging don't you? LOL. Very very hot. HG talking dirty is one of my favorite thoughts, and definitely in Victorian vocabulary, pretty please!! I also loved Pete's reaction, and the continued by-play between him and Myka.

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Re: So evil. athena_mou August 16 2011, 23:35:02 UTC
I had to break it up and this was the only logical place to do so. Sorry...
HG might have a word or two to share with Myka, but she's mostly being good.
You can always count on Pete for a little comic relief :) I like to work the friendship/sibling relationship that I feel btw those two. Sometimes they fight, sometimes they tease each other, no matter what they do they still care for each other. Pete has Myka's back and she has his. I think that we see that more and more on the show this season.
Thanks for the comments. Greatly appreciated :)

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anonymous August 16 2011, 19:45:04 UTC
I must say this is one of the most romantic stories you've written so far, I mean, the loveseat scene was so touching, I almost cry, you write the characters so well, it makes every story really understandable, if you know what I mean ;)

Keep finishing your stories, it helps me rediscovering them and read them like the first time.

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athena_mou August 16 2011, 23:39:04 UTC
Aww, thank you :) I guess I've been in a romantic mood lately (writing Helena's and Myka's wedding in another story) and it rubbed off here too. After all, sexy lingerie is romantic, isn't it?
I want the interaction btw Myka and Helena to be sweet and tender in this one. A little teasing and stuff is okay, but mostly just sweet.

I'm working on it! I've decided to focus on a couple of stories. I've written quite a lot this summer, even though a tough schedule IRL. I need to get back to my WH12 scrip too... ::sigh:: so much to do and so little time.
thanks for the sweet comments. Always appreciated! :)

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