[1] Fanfic: Shine A Light (2/2)

[atenais_pala]

Title: Shine A Light
Author: Atenais
Rating: NC-15 (maybe?)
Length: Two chapters: I | II
Words: 6623
Pairings: GTOP (SeungHyun/JiYong)
Genre: Canon, Angst
Beta: aislinoriel.
Summary: What happened backstage at Shine A Light.
Disclaimer: Unfortunately, these boys don't belong to me. But the story certainly is the fruit of my imagination.
Warning: language, inconsistency

Comments

[saime_ika]

Woah. I'm kinda left speechless. Recently I stumpeld upon the first part of this story and I was already stunned. Today you really made my day by posting the second part.
I really love your writing style and how you described the problems they're facing with themselves.

(and I'm happry about the happy end XDDDD)

Thanks for this story :)

[atenais_pala]

Oh, I'm really glad to know that you like my writing style. Sometimes I think my writing style is really boring.

The real problems seem insignificant if you aren't the person involved.
About the happy end, I just can write happy endings! ♥
Thank you for your lovely comment.

[fullofwishes]

"Once again", as GD would say, I just have to give kudos to you and the amazing 0ddie13, for such a beautiful creation.

I'll give some quotes, not as many as I'd like, but I don't want my comment to be longer than the fic!

his absence was like a lost particle in the amalgam that was that night.

No better way to say that things just aren't right without him. So amazing and poetic.

He felt relieved to know that his thoughts could not be read, so much effort to construct this idealized image and he betrayed it in every thought. He would never cease to be the chubby kid from childhood, his self-confidence based on the loose certainty of his current good looks. He would never cease to be what he really was, a feeling forged with great effort.

That's really Hyun in a nutshell, I feel. It's heartbreaking. ♥

Why did he have to feel so sensitive about everything? Better to write good lyrics after all of this and make this frivolous anguish worthwhile. Wasn’t this what he did? Exploit his emotions to his advantage?Oh Ji...I do that with writing

[atenais_pala]

Tegan, I swear, I could cry reading your comment. Since I really admire you as a writer, to know that you liked it means a lot to me.

I can see that you liked the parts I liked more, so I think you really understood what I tried say in this fic. What should I say? I wrote this to a friend, but I'm happy that you and 0ddie13 liked it too.

Sorry for my poor reply, I'm feeling a bit down right now.

Thank you, dear.

[nitsa_maro]

My God, this is without a doubt one of the best fanfics i have ever read. You write so beautifully, it blew my mind away. Memoring this so i can read it every time i want. Amazing job ♥

[atenais_pala]

Are you sure??? OMG, this made me really happy, no, super happy!!!
Thank you so much for your comment, it really means a lot to me.
*hugs*

[atenais_pala]

Since you are one of the great GTOP shippers that I know, if you liked my fic I believe I reached my goal. Actually I wrote this fic for a friend who initiated me in this fandom and I'm really grateful towards her, because I absolutely love this fandom.

Thank you for be so supportive. And thank you for love GTOP! <3

[lovelyable]

hey atenais, if it's not too out of place i have a few suggestions for you if you decide to write again in the future. i know a lot of this may be because of things getting lost in translation, or semantics due to the difficulties of translating words/phrases/sentences that are very conversational in one language but end up awkward and hard to read in the language it is translated into

[atenais_pala]

First of all, I have no plans to write again. Well, I can see you dislike my style, and I feel I really cannot change, because it's my way to tell things.

We know the plot is just a excuse to speak from our pov.

But I can see you really took your time to comment here, so, thank you so much.