[1] Fanfic: Shine A Light (2/2)

[atenais_pala]

Title: Shine A Light
Author: Atenais
Rating: NC-15 (maybe?)
Length: Two chapters: I | II
Words: 6623
Pairings: GTOP (SeungHyun/JiYong)
Genre: Canon, Angst
Beta: aislinoriel.
Summary: What happened backstage at Shine A Light.
Disclaimer: Unfortunately, these boys don't belong to me. But the story certainly is the fruit of my imagination.
Warning: language, inconsistency

Comments

[fullofwishes]

"Once again", as GD would say, I just have to give kudos to you and the amazing 0ddie13, for such a beautiful creation.

I'll give some quotes, not as many as I'd like, but I don't want my comment to be longer than the fic!

his absence was like a lost particle in the amalgam that was that night.

No better way to say that things just aren't right without him. So amazing and poetic.

He felt relieved to know that his thoughts could not be read, so much effort to construct this idealized image and he betrayed it in every thought. He would never cease to be the chubby kid from childhood, his self-confidence based on the loose certainty of his current good looks. He would never cease to be what he really was, a feeling forged with great effort.

That's really Hyun in a nutshell, I feel. It's heartbreaking. ♥

Why did he have to feel so sensitive about everything? Better to write good lyrics after all of this and make this frivolous anguish worthwhile. Wasn’t this what he did? Exploit his emotions to his advantage?

Oh Ji...I do that with writing sometimes. ^^;;

When the other returned to the living room, JiYong mumbled out loud, “I can’t believe I’m getting advice from a virgin!”

I lol-ed so hard. Haha, your life GD.

And one day all would end, Big Bang, the pleasure this career gave him, his love, his dreams, his plans. Just one thing would survive time: his memories and he should decide which memory he would like to possess when nothing else mattered. He had to decide to be among the ruins of an ego built with compliments and pretenses, or the ashes of one true love. When everything was no more than memories, what is it that he would like to remember?

This is probably one of my favourite paragraphs. I just found it to be so poignant, and it's so definitive and pivotal as part of his thought process. I loved it. Ah! ♥♥♥♥♥

“To tell you the truth, we already suspected, but it was SeungRi who told me it was something true.” said DaeSung.
At that moment little SeungHyun sent a look full of wisdom and confidence to the older SeungHyun.

Hehe, oh wow, you write Ri so well. Makes me smile.

Already the virtual communities devoted to the group posted, enthusiastically, that Sunday, the light of G-Dragon had been so dazzling that it drew away the darkness triumphantly.

A perfect ending to a perfect story. *bows*

You're so amazing unnie, it was such a pleasure to read. I'm sad you say you won't be writing any more, but I'm happy you wrote this. I'm going to mem it forever and read it many times.

[atenais_pala]

Tegan, I swear, I could cry reading your comment. Since I really admire you as a writer, to know that you liked it means a lot to me.

I can see that you liked the parts I liked more, so I think you really understood what I tried say in this fic. What should I say? I wrote this to a friend, but I'm happy that you and 0ddie13 liked it too.

Sorry for my poor reply, I'm feeling a bit down right now.

Thank you, dear.