I read it yesterday before I went to sleep and after this amazing story, I was just too tired to say anything, but I came back now. Because I really think this needs a comment! As always, your setting is wonderfully described and the situation you put them in is promising and interesting, which just leaves you waiting for how they make through it. The emotions you picture are so well described that I sometimes felt they are my own. Just amazing! I love how you turn Sho and Jun into two very different characters and how Keiko needs them both to feel complete. You gave her a hard decission - to chose between them and as the end shows, this is just impossible - I totally agree with her! Thank you! Thank you a lot for writing this and sharing it with us! <3
P.S.: I just found yout masterpost and have a feeling that my weekend will be full of your stories^^
It would be totally impossible to pick between Jun and Sho. My life is a constant struggle of "who do I actually like more?" So believe me, Keiko was in the same boat. Sort of ;)
damn woman what have you done with my brain. i'm reading this at midnight, couldn't sleep. now I can't wait to finish typing so I can sleep and hoping that I will dream this. XD What should I say about this fic. Nothing but excitement XD I must say that I'm not a good commentator but there's nothing to comment, really. This is so perfect that I was truly disappointed when the story ends, and realize that this is just a fanfic, not a synopsis of an upcoming SP drama featuring Sho, Jun and Keiko. Damn. ;-; One thing though; there are points where you write so clearly and thoroughly, as if I am Keiko. I even shook my head when I read the sex scenes. I felt inexplicably ashamed, an Arashi poster glued next to my bed, not helping my mind at all. XD Please keep up the good work! XD
Ahahaha, what I'd give for a special "drama" of this. Although they couldn't show half of it...I guess they'd have to fade to black? Haha, why don't they let us come up with the drama plots over there?!
I'm totally amused that Arashi was watching over you as you read this. Avert your eyes, Arashi!!
I read this in one go and found myself completely immersed in it. The Jun/Keiko was almost frustratingly hot; the Sho/Keiko was painfully sweet (ugh, below the belt, melancholy widower finding love again!!); when they all got together, you'd built it such that it made a lot of sense and felt right. Your Keiko POV is lovely, also. I really enjoyed this fic all around! Thank you for sharing. ♥
As soon as I knew I was making Sho a widower I wanted to give myself a slap. I am too terrible LMAO, why do I do these things? And plus I was so excited to go for Jun/Keiko! Is this the first in existence? I need more!
Finally got a chance to read this and... *fans self*
Really nice work!! I liked all the characterizations - especially Keiko. :)
The undercover aspect was interesting... and the corruption angle. Just everything, really. I'll need to read it again to have more coherent thoughts. :)))
Ahahaha, I'm glad the undercover situation wasn't too unbelievable. I did a bit of eye rolling, all so I could take advantage of the 'undercover couple' trope ;)
I know I'm late at this but I started reading the first part and then I stopped cause I knew I'd sleep late just to finish it but I didn't want it to end so I tried to expand the pleasure if it lol I read bits of it and omg I didn't want it to end why did it end (┛ಠ__ಠ)┛┻━┻ and omg I love your stories sfm I have no words ༎ຶ‿༎ຶ everything's perfect as always щ(ಠ益ಠщ) and yay for the sexy times (◕‿‿◕｡) bestest of all and yes this is me when I finish reading your fics cause I love them sfm and I just want to keep going forever and ever ヽ( ಠ__ಠ)ﾉ┌┛Σ(computer) And it's 3am and Idc and I used "and" too many times but who gives a fck and omg I'm done I have a love/hate relationship with your work that ugh I can't anymore щ(´༎ຶД༎ຶ`щ)
now that I'm calm lol I can say that every time I read your fics it feels like I'm watching it, I can see it clearly and I even laugh and cry with it. With this one in particular I felt like I was Keiko omg (not just cause I truly wanted to be ifyouknowwhatimean) but the way it was written I believe? ugh I suck with words and it's hard for me to explain what I'm thinking but I love it, your fics are so detailed is like I can even smell the effing chicken she was cooking you know? You're amazing and thank you
These comments cracked me up in the best way. I'm happy that you enjoyed it, even if you made yourself stay up late. Oops! Thank you so much for your comments, it's always great to know that the little silly details I put in actually make a difference! Sometimes I worry they're irrelevant or slow things down :)
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Because I really think this needs a comment!
As always, your setting is wonderfully described and the situation you put them in is promising and interesting, which just leaves you waiting for how they make through it.
The emotions you picture are so well described that I sometimes felt they are my own. Just amazing!
I love how you turn Sho and Jun into two very different characters and how Keiko needs them both to feel complete. You gave her a hard decission - to chose between them and as the end shows, this is just impossible - I totally agree with her!
Thank you! Thank you a lot for writing this and sharing it with us! <3
P.S.: I just found yout masterpost and have a feeling that my weekend will be full of your stories^^
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It would be totally impossible to pick between Jun and Sho. My life is a constant struggle of "who do I actually like more?" So believe me, Keiko was in the same boat. Sort of ;)
Thank you!
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i'm reading this at midnight, couldn't sleep. now I can't wait to finish typing so I can sleep and hoping that I will dream this. XD
What should I say about this fic. Nothing but excitement XD I must say that I'm not a good commentator but there's nothing to comment, really. This is so perfect that I was truly disappointed when the story ends, and realize that this is just a fanfic, not a synopsis of an upcoming SP drama featuring Sho, Jun and Keiko. Damn. ;-;
One thing though; there are points where you write so clearly and thoroughly, as if I am Keiko. I even shook my head when I read the sex scenes. I felt inexplicably ashamed, an Arashi poster glued next to my bed, not helping my mind at all. XD
Please keep up the good work! XD
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I'm totally amused that Arashi was watching over you as you read this. Avert your eyes, Arashi!!
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Really nice work!! I liked all the characterizations - especially Keiko. :)
The undercover aspect was interesting... and the corruption angle. Just everything, really. I'll need to read it again to have more coherent thoughts. :)))
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Thanks so much, glad you liked it!
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and yes this is me when I finish reading your fics cause I love them sfm and I just want to keep going forever and ever ヽ( ಠ__ಠ)ﾉ┌┛Σ(computer)
And it's 3am and Idc and I used "and" too many times but who gives a fck and omg I'm done I have a love/hate relationship with your work that ugh I can't anymore щ(´༎ຶД༎ຶ`щ)
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