Okay, turned into a little more than a drabble! for _workinprogress, who asked for something Entourage. ♥ (We could still use translators! And I even have a few more drabble slots open... :D)
"You're not alone," Eric said. He meant that half those people knew who Vince was, what was going on in his life and his career, he was the least alone guy in the world-except Vince tipped his head over and looked at him, and the rest of it kind of dried up, and that wasn't what Eric meant anymore.
He cleared his throat, except that was a mistake, because he licked his mouth after, and Vince watched him do it. Vince's grin had slid away. He was looking weird, his face almost hard. "Vince," Eric said, and it came out like-
"E," Vince said. And then he said, "Eric." And then he leaned in and they were kissing.
THAT'S the moment I always hope for, in fanfiction of any length, that pivotal point where everything changes, the moment of realization, when the world looks completely different after. Lovely, lovely.
This is hilarious and defly is a scene that didn't quite make it on the show - sounds just like them. Turtle's reaction is spot-on, as is Drama's, and Eric & Vince I could hear & see in my head.
My favorite bit is Eric picked up his head and stared at him. "Okay, Vince, why are you using a pick up line on me?"
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"You're not alone," Eric said. He meant that half those people knew who Vince was, what was going on in his life and his career, he was the least alone guy in the world-except Vince tipped his head over and looked at him, and the rest of it kind of dried up, and that wasn't what Eric meant anymore.
He cleared his throat, except that was a mistake, because he licked his mouth after, and Vince watched him do it. Vince's grin had slid away. He was looking weird, his face almost hard. "Vince," Eric said, and it came out like-
"E," Vince said. And then he said, "Eric." And then he leaned in and they were kissing.
THAT'S the moment I always hope for, in fanfiction of any length, that pivotal point where everything changes, the moment of realization, when the world looks completely different after. Lovely, lovely.
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My favorite bit is Eric picked up his head and stared at him. "Okay, Vince, why are you using a pick up line on me?"
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