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Ficathon entry for loridragus: Negotiation

May 20, 2007 12:12

Title: Negotiation
Author: textfiend
Written for: loridragus
Prompt: Ash and Scribbs investigate the death of a buyer of illegal exotic pets.
Word count: 1500

( Let's make a deal )

ficathon07, fan fiction

Comments 19

loridragus May 21 2007, 07:16:30 UTC

Thank you this was great. You do have a way with these two.

textfiend May 22 2007, 00:26:35 UTC

Thank you. I know it's not as directly related to the prompt as you may have had in mind...

crimsonwhisper May 21 2007, 20:15:04 UTC

Ha whats the one thing that can trump a crippling fear of snakes, mum. Yup. but really id rather deal with the snakes myself. I pictured a very amusing fiendish look on Scribbs face as she was planning the whole scenario, and the colour draining from Ash's face in return. hehe. great fic.

textfiend May 22 2007, 00:29:33 UTC

Out of the frying pan, into the fire. :) Thanks for commenting.

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textfiend May 26 2007, 18:12:22 UTC

Thank you. I thought Scribbs would be the type to view the office computer as just another toy.

lenina101 May 22 2007, 20:35:22 UTC

Brilliant. Fabulous dialogue. I am also intrigued about that phone conversation...

textfiend May 26 2007, 18:12:53 UTC

I'm glad you liked it.

debonisa May 26 2007, 13:46:36 UTC

Ha ha! That was really good! The last bit about Ash not being able to cancel dinner was hilarious! This was fabulous play on the characters! I too, laughed at the solitaire thing! That's our Scribbs!

Love,

Amy

textfiend May 26 2007, 18:13:32 UTC

Thank you!