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kitrina23 March 13 2010, 02:42:59 UTC
I've read all four chapters so far. I've never heard the story's title's song-title counterpart. I also believe that Gibbs is gonna be going back to trying to commit alcoholic suicide- he tried it once when his girls were taken from him... twice when he had amnesia and remembered them gone again. I now wish Gibbs would get his head straight and tell Tony why Hart was there, because she left when his ex-mother-in-law left too.

The way the writers wrote out that basement scene, it looked like Gibbs and Hart were gonna stop trying to get together. He sees that she'll stay trying to get more cases to help her career along while trailing him- and is hoping that she'll see he just can't want her anymore. I hope I'm coherent with that, I'm doped up on pain killers and just got very bored. My power was out for three hours due to a transformer blowing up two doors away on a power/telephone pole. BG & E finally fixed it.

I like the story, but I'm just hoping for a happy ending, but still haven't heard the song.

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ashbear02 March 16 2010, 01:02:07 UTC
It's an amazing song so I definitely recommend it, in fact the entire CD is completely awesome. I'm hoping they stop that ridiculous almost romance, if only because I find it annoying.

It certainly sounds like you've had one heck of a day! o_o I hope things get better soon, and I'm incredibly happy you're enjoying this fic. =3

(I'm a sucker for happy endings.)

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marmillady March 13 2010, 03:36:50 UTC
This is so angsty - please let Tony listen to Gibbs soon - and let Gibbs say something meaningful!

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ashbear02 March 16 2010, 01:04:44 UTC
^_^; Sorry, Angst is by bread and butter. Thanks for the comment though.

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murgy31 March 13 2010, 03:50:03 UTC
I absolutely loved this! Great job!

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ashbear02 March 16 2010, 01:06:01 UTC
Thank you!

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batina35 March 13 2010, 05:02:26 UTC
I think Tony should make Gibbs wait a while. Gibbs did a bad bad thing (multiple times). Love Tony and Jenny. Fast friends, very cool. Can't wait for more.

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ashbear02 March 16 2010, 01:06:41 UTC
Thanks for the comment, and yeah Tony will definitely make Gibbs wait for a while. =D

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psyko_kittie March 13 2010, 05:14:08 UTC
*hugs the boys* Another great chapter. *goes off to patiently wait for the next one*

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ashbear02 March 16 2010, 01:07:23 UTC
Aww, thank you! =3 I'm very pleased you enjoy it. And the boys could definitely do with some hugs at the moment.

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