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apapazukamori in asetofnewrules

[ficlet][oneshot] Fortelling

Apr 19, 2008 23:38

Title: Foretelling
Fandom: Tokyo Babylon
Characters/Pairings: Subaru, Seishirou
Genre: Gen
Words: 301
Rating: G
Notes: Another "I am drinking and must write" drabble-ficlet-thing. Prompt from emudii, and it's my first TB fic ever. Wah. Prompt was "driving".

( Subaru had learned long ago to expect the hand of fate in everything. )

gift-fic, fandom: tokyo babylon, ficlet

Comments 7

emudii April 20 2008, 03:53:51 UTC

...they're driving on Rainbow Bridge. :(

Wow, anata. I definitely wasn't expecting that. Wistful, sad... poor Subaru. He really has no idea. He sounds so hopeful in this one, too.

apapazukamori April 20 2008, 04:01:35 UTC

*eee* I'm glad you got that. ♥ I didn't want to just come out and say it.

Only the best for my anata. :)

emudii April 20 2008, 04:15:39 UTC

Hee. The mention of Odaiba did it, you clever thing. ;)

a_white_rain April 20 2008, 04:25:47 UTC

That was delightfully creepy.

apapazukamori April 20 2008, 08:24:23 UTC

Hee, thank you! :D

ilcocoabean April 20 2008, 19:42:12 UTC

Oh, this was wonderful.

sakanagi April 21 2008, 06:15:36 UTC

That's really good. ^^ Very nice characterisation, too.