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apapazukamori in asetofnewrules

[oneshot] Entwined

Nov 16, 2008 10:43

Title: Entwined
Fandom: Code Geass
Characters/Pairings: Lelouch/Suzaku
Genre: Dark/Smut
Word count: 1,415
Notes: For the prompt "Code Geass, Lelouch/Suzaku: Gun play - "You're only fooling yourself"" over at springkink. Set during the "missing month" in R2 episode 21. *headdesk* Double-mine, I hope I never have to write these two ever again. XD;;;

( 'No one will ever wield you as I will' )

fandom: code geass, springkink, pair: lelouch/suzaku, oneshot

Comments 15

amarielah November 16 2008, 18:27:09 UTC

Oh, I absolutely loved this. Wonderfully IC and well written. Smoking hot to boot.

keleosnoonna November 16 2008, 23:49:23 UTC

WOW! SO GOOD!
Lelouch and Suzaku were really IC IMO, great job!
AND OMG! HOT!!!!

rainbow_cnxn November 17 2008, 00:35:39 UTC

Someone copypasta'd this on /a/ and brightened up my day.

I have to say, this was damn hot. Agreeing with the "wonderfully IC" comments. Power-plays are hot, and boy do these two pull that off. It's the type of "oh shit, this is sexy" as when Lelouch was sneering up at Suzaku after he'd been knocked down in the cave. You did a great job of capturing the same feeling.

Anyways. Did I mention this was hot? Because it was. Kudos.

P.S. This was hot.

apapazukamori November 17 2008, 01:07:05 UTC

Someone copypasta'd this on /a/ and brightened up my day.

Wow, really? Do you happen to have/remember the link? Now I'm curious. XD

And thank you so much! I'm so glad people like it. (And a little relieved, I worried about their characterizations, given the pinball game that was the last half of R2.)

I have this bad habit of going tl;dr, sorry rainbow_cnxn November 17 2008, 01:48:57 UTC

Sorry, the thread got 404'd. What a jerk mod...

I'm actually glad you wrote them like you did. One has to note that we get very little insight into their relationship in the last arc. We left off with "What of it? *angry stares*", then a lol timeskip, and then what could be best described as "theatre". As far as their interactions went, we had them talking about Zero Requiem expressionlessly, and then Suzaku threw Lelouch to the ground, and then they went off and did plot things until lol suicide. Director interviews said that by the end, they were such close friends that they could change each other's underwear. Sure, I'll take Taniguchi's word on it, but we the viewers were never shown how this happened, nor were we ever really shown this "true" friendship in action. Suzaku could have held absolutely no love for Lelouch up until he stabbed him, and it would've still made perfect sense ( ... )

amanuensis1 November 17 2008, 10:09:26 UTC

Oh, I loved this. Angst-sweetness that does not lapse into fluff, unabashed smut that is as brief as their moments of privacy. The prose is beautiful, the pacing captivating. Lelouch skimmed his fingers over Suzaku's bottom lip as the knight mouthed a name. Spoke another. "Lelouch." What do you mean, you hope you never write these two again? ^_~ I insist!

kerina November 17 2008, 20:39:04 UTC

Oh...my God. That was wonderfully written and in character. And hot. And just great. Thanks for sharing.