[oneshot] Entwined

[apapazukamori]

Title: Entwined
Fandom: Code Geass
Characters/Pairings: Lelouch/Suzaku
Genre: Dark/Smut
Word count: 1,415
Notes: For the prompt "Code Geass, Lelouch/Suzaku: Gun play - "You're only fooling yourself"" over at springkink. Set during the "missing month" in R2 episode 21. *headdesk* Double-mine, I hope I never have to write these two ever again. XD;;;

Comments

[flo_nelja]

Wow. It is superb.
The beginning, Lelouch being all theatral, Suzaku all angsty... it' so much like the better scenes of the series ! I love every line of it.
"The fact you care would imply it is still useful."
"We're both going to get what we deserve."
"You will be magnificent, Suzaku."
There's just a thing I don't understand, I have the feeling that Suzaku still fears Geass, even if it can't be used two times against the same person... or maybe he fears that could happen if he managed what he wants - to convince Lelouch removing it, only for being able to have another one cast on him ?

[apapazukamori]

Thanks for the comment, I'm glad you liked it. :)

I remember when Lelouch was with Charles in the World of C, and he was trying to kill him, because Charles had the geass in both eyes, Lelouch was trying to avoid making eye contact with him. Since he'd already been geassed once by Charles, I thought having two eyes allowed for two uses on one person. :d (I'm not sure if that's actually what happens, but I don't know if it was ever made clear.) So, thinking along those lines, Lelouch has the geass in both eyes by this point and Suzaku knows there is the possibility of it being used on him again. :)

[flo_nelja]

For me, Lelouch's Geass was the only one which had the limitation "only one time for the same person".
But I hadn't thought about the two eyes.
Question of interpretation, as you say.

[electrumqueen]

this is super, super-lovely. your characterization seems to me pitch-perfect, and the dialogue just keeps making my heart flip.

[also? with the hot!]

[aria_dc_al_fine]

A meaningless offer of safety, and an equally meaningless acceptance

[sora_ishida]

(lol, late comment is late)

Holy hell, Double. How do you do it? How do you always mange to channel the characters so damn well? I can see the whole scene happening in my mind as I read, and there's no part out of place - no detail left unnoticed. *_*

*FLAIL* I loved it so SO so much. Sexy and dark and sad and angsty and awesome and HOTHOTHOT *fans self* And pfft to never writing them again. You know how easily I can tribble you~ :P

[macavitykitsune]

Brilliant. Evocative. FUCKING HOT. I loved it.