[oneshot][ficlet] Little Paradoxes

Nov 07, 2008 23:07

Title: Little Paradoxes
Fandom: D.Gray-Man
Characters/Pairings: Allen/Lavi
Genre: Gen...ish. (I have no idea what to call it. XD)
Words: 611
Notes: Fail title is fail. For p_sky, who gave me the prompt "umbrella". Rating's probably PG-13ish. Set post current chapters, but the spoilers are subtle. :3

'Watch me not hold my breath.' )

pair: lavi/allen, gift-fic, oneshot, ficlet, fandom: d.gray-man

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p_sky November 8 2008, 04:28:57 UTC
SO, I already JUST told you this but this is lovely and I'm in love with it.

I was worried about the prompt umbrellas but you used it so beautifully; I love the way Allen thinks it looks like the underside of an umbrella. Just so cute and sweet but... so sad.

Also, Lavi ♥♥♥

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apapazukamori November 8 2008, 13:30:59 UTC
Heee, once we got the context down, the prompt came easily. :D *glomp* I'm glad you liked it!

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emudii November 8 2008, 04:29:36 UTC
Um, firstly: "Kan-dumb." Brilliant translation of "Bakanda," really. But I must shamefully report that my knee-jerk reaction was not that. It was "...condom?" XD

Secondly. For being gen-ish? That was a super hot ending. OMG. I am so serious. You know what I'm referring to. I'm a sucker for that sort of crap. Now I have images. And, and... I need new panties. X3

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apapazukamori November 8 2008, 13:29:53 UTC
Yeah, I had that moment too. XD (But! Condoms were even more controversial back then than they are now, so Allen's disapproval of Kanda's personality/existence still fits! XD)

Heee. >3 I encourage these images.

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emudii November 8 2008, 13:51:10 UTC
...I'm currently cackling over: "Kan-douche" which is still all your fault, you made me and M make a list of all the stupid insults Allen could make out of that guy's name. XD

I'm still blushing. DAMN, do I love that ending. HEE. ♥

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sakanagi November 8 2008, 04:53:00 UTC
That's a really cute story. I like the writing style a lot.

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kimikoshine November 8 2008, 05:39:48 UTC
Awww!! so cute!!!

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dollypie November 8 2008, 06:03:36 UTC
aww sweet!!!!!! I'm becoming addicted to your writing. <3

and Kan-dumb <33

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